Off to the Races

I feel like a dirt-bag but at least I got rich.

Haha this game was awesome. I laughed out loud at the "!!!!!!" button because that is exactly how I felt. I also enjoyed how parts of the game rhymed, it made the overall experience catchy and fun.

I like how you make the story simple but I thought it would be nice if you had more details in your story (like little bit more about introduction). The choice you create was efficient that I felt I'm controlling the story. Thanks for the story!

I learned one thing throughout this game, nice guys finish last. I'm just kidding. This game was not what I expected, and I definitely was trying to vie for what I would do, however that did not lead me to where I wanted. Instead, I went the opposite way to see how it would progress, and it did lead me to an ending, but it kind of left me confused. It was pretty short considered the subject matter. With all that said, it was fun to see how it would end up.

I thought it was an interesting game and you didn't know what to expect while reading the passage and controlling the game. Which I thought was entertaining, but it gave me a sense of "oh go back, try another answer". I thought it was fun.

I liked the writing story, the name definitely drew me in. The story didn't have much of a goal for me to get engaged in so the options didn't really matter to me. I had enough info to make decisions but I kept getting shit on for what I chose and got beat up at the end. I guess the character I play is just really optimistic?

I can see effort in this. It is a bit confusing. I'm not entirely sure what exactly happened within the story, but I felt like there was enough word length and descriptive details about the events. I don't think I figured out the hints to your story.

I liked your writing and the way it rhymed. I was a little confused at some parts so I didn't know which choice to pick but most of the time I felt like I had control over my "character's" actions. It was interesting how the story turned out and how the character became rich, it was unexpected.

The game has a witty dialogue with a funny premise. I enjoyed the rhymes and found it to be a fun click-through game. Although, I didn't really see much of a plot to the game. The choices you made didn't feel arbitrary however there was not much context as to why you may want to make one decision over another. Perhaps if you were feeling chaotic you might make the more morally wrong choices and then end up in a worse state by the end of the game. The main character was fun and I imagined something like a Mr.Peanut character. So overall quite fun!