Trapped!

better than homework

There were not enough details to make the story fun. There were far too many grammar mistakes that took you out of the story.

Considering this game is under Mystery/Puzzle, I'm afraid it's extremely lacking in the puzzle department. The note tells you where to find the key, you literally just have to look at the wall to find the green door, and the closest this game comes to an actual puzzle is making the player guess which coloured key opens the blue door. (Spoilers: It's the blue key. Who'd have thought?)

Also, the game never explains why you're in the room, or how you got in the room. You just kind of escape and that's the end.

I do like Escape the Room games, but this game needs a few more areas to explore and a lot more puzzles before it'd actually be enjoyable.

I got so confused, O_o but overall, nice game

Short and linear but a good experiment.

Not the best but fun

very easy, but I guess it's not too bad for a first attempt.

After 2 replays and trying different 'paths'... Screw it, the adventure is extremely linear. With every single option ushering you to 'fk off' the room as soon as possible. Descriptions are worthless, the point where you actually get to make a good decision- the keys, you get denied of other options but the blue one just like an bad GM telling you what to do each time. This isn't even worthy of making into a actual Flash game, it's just TOO short.
I recommend giving the players more freedom of movement, rather then just pointing the obvious solution, it helps with the length and the general difficulty overall, no one wants to play a adventure that ends in 5 seconds.
3/10

Effort please

Not bad for a first game, but I'd have allowed more options