astor the huntsman v2

A fantasy storygame by Dovahkiin

Player Rating1.93/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 20 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty3/8

"Trek through the forest"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level3/8

"Must be at least this tall to play"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

Player Comments

The shifting perspectives is super annoying and disorienting. I don't understand how the money (and how it's spent) fits into the story, and the story really needs proper grammar. It shows promise, but you need to HAVE a story to effectively write about it.

— Allusional on 3/3/2014 5:58:39 PM with a score of 0

This game has the same problem as the first one, where it switches between second and third person POV. At the beginnin, the game says "You start hearing rumors of unusual military activity, which is really worrying astor" ... I thought I WAS Astor. If I'm not Astor than who am I? :p