Player Comments on Cheating?

I played the game and I felt guilty on cheating on him. But the other time he cheated on me. Is harry's sister my best friend? WHO'S SALLY This game makes entirely no sense.

Husband or boy friend it kept switching

I don't like this for a few reasons. For starters, the grammar was very bad. I mean...very bad...
Also, the reality changes depending on what choice you pick which is pretty annoying. And why did you use parentheses to tell us that dudes phone number? What was the point?

So you find out you are being cheated on, and that's the entire plot

This was pretty boring but also interesting although the story was only like 3 or 4 clicks away of finishing. But please, as I submitted my email I will want a reply not depending on it or required but I will rely and look forward to your email. No spamming please but I did enjoy reading! Thank you for your time and please have a wonderful day!
~Kim

Boring as heck

i have to play it again.

That as short

Umm...

sorry but that was not fun sooooooooo boring!

Make sure to place a period at the end of the last word of the sentence, like this. See how I didn't do it, like this ?Well, that's one thing to keep in mind. It wasn't too bad for your first story game, but not a whole lot of work seemed to go into the project. Maybe spend more time and effort on your next project.

The concept itself here, a romantic drama where you suspect your partner of cheating and investigate, is not a bad one. However, it is rather short and would be better if you actually got to do some more interesting detective work while trying to figure out the truth. Also, you -really- need to learn to put spaces after periods and commas in general. You also misspelled the word "sober" as "sobre."

Well your writing's not bad and I'm sure you have the potential do to better, but... You decide to trust your boyfriend, you don't assume he's cheating on you, it turns out he is cheating on you... And this is the good ending? :p

Ok, Really short and could use more interest in it like was he cheating or what. but not bad needs improvement

Not bad for a first game. I would have liked to have more of a mystery tone, like you have to investigate his phone or spy on him to find out if he's cheating. But great start and I hope to see more from you.

You should space after periods. Proof read your work. I thought it was funny that the names were, Harry, Edward, Jake, and Danny. I don't like that our decisions somehow change reality. Depending on what I do he is or is not cheating on me? That makes sense. I do like that you gave us multiple endings. In the future though try to put more work into your story before you publish it.

Poor grammar, way too short, and the endings don't line up. If you do one thing, your partner is a completely different person than if you do something else.

It's not bad, but too short. If it was longer, you would get higher ratings.

Not bad for a first attempt. It was a good concept, but the length did not give it justice. Add a little bit more background and some more choices and it could go from being good to great. It was definitely not the worst seen for a first attempt. Keep it up and you'll be producing great games later.

for a first game it wasn't to bad. Trust me I have seen much worse from first time writers. Now for the criticism the problem with the game was it lacked immersion and depth. Maybe you could write a background for the boyfriend but especially the main character as I had no idea about who she was. The idea was good but I just think more detail description and different options could greatly better it. However it was not bad I want to stress this.