Player Comments on Chillin' in the Park

Everyone has said this is bad, its unpublished and you already know its bad so I won't waste your time on that.

I've seen worse "lol random" type games but I've also seen better. Really seems like you just went with what came to your head but didn't really do anything too crazy either.

Really like the Masterlock joke! Those things break easily for some reason! lol :P

I surprisingly liked the quiz a lot though...like a lot! The impossible quiz reference was nostalgic as heck, I was obsessed with that game (and its sequel) back when I was a teen! I think the quiz covered a nice set of both serious and more memey topics (including MLP! lol :P), it was good...I might just make my own quiz game as a result...

Anyways be sure to DM me if you want to respond to this. Was a nice read despite its quality! ;)

The time I spent correcting grammatical errors on this storygame really went to waste, it seems.

If you're retarded enough to even consider publishing this, an heroing yourself is the best thing you could possibly do for the gene pool.

Bad. Just very bad

kill yourself

There is no description of anyone near you on the first page, but you are prompted with "Don't rob him". My brother in christ, I hear a liquid falling or something and a random staff.

Man I know you never wrote romance before, we've all seen the thread, but holy shit this has got to be the worst romance storygame I ever read. I know the advice might not have been helpful to your situation, but goddamn, I'm not sure the people posting in that thread were even aware this was what they were working with

Slamming down on that publish button was not one of your better decisions, but thanks for the point.