Player Comments on Chillin' in the Park

The time I spent correcting grammatical errors on this storygame really went to waste, it seems.

If you're retarded enough to even consider publishing this, an heroing yourself is the best thing you could possibly do for the gene pool.

Bad. Just very bad

kill yourself

There is no description of anyone near you on the first page, but you are prompted with "Don't rob him". My brother in christ, I hear a liquid falling or something and a random staff.

Man I know you never wrote romance before, we've all seen the thread, but holy shit this has got to be the worst romance storygame I ever read. I know the advice might not have been helpful to your situation, but goddamn, I'm not sure the people posting in that thread were even aware this was what they were working with

Slamming down on that publish button was not one of your better decisions, but thanks for the point.