Player Comments on Don't get distracted!

Short. Definitely short. But I loved this.

There’s something endearing about how oblivious Mr. Lee is. It borders on slapstick comedy at times, which honestly works in the story’s favour. He’s a borderline super assassin with the odd quirk of barely taking his job seriously, clumsy, aloof, and entirely too casual for someone so lethal. But that actually gives him a kind of humanising charm that really works. He’s not just a weapon; he’s a character.

There’s also a surprising amount of hidden depth in the outcomes. You can really feel the butterfly effect taking shape based on the choices made. It gives the piece a quiet realness and choice beneath the humour.

Stylistically, it's just well written. It's immersive, engaging, and genuinely fun to read. My only real critique is that it felt too short. I think there was room for more worldbuilding, some extra space to let the setting breathe and unfold. But for what’s here, it’s rich, clever, and really well executed.

Great job. Would love to see more stories from you to be honest.

I cannot say I was expecting a love story between an assassin and a knife.
This story branches wonderfully, and as it is a short read, it's 100% worth it to read through all the endings. Adam's general silliness contributes to the chaotic nature of the story.
Adam is a very consistent character, just wanting to do things in his own way. He's not evolved on much, but that does feel in character.
The writing style reminds me of an old comic book, if a comic book had no pictures. By that, I mean not very serious and action packed. This is one of the settings I feel like this works. The dialogue feels natural for a majority of the story, although corporate-speak has always seemed gibberish to me.
I thought this was overall a very funny story, and it gave me a sense of nostalgia for Bond parodies like Austin Powers. I still wonder about the logistics of the knife romance, but I don't particularly want it explained either.
My only real issues with this is that it's too short, and even though we know a bit about Adam, we don't get too much about him, or anything from other characters.
In general, a great story, very funny for a quick read when bored. I did knock a point for the characterization, but I still give it a 7/8.