Player Comments on Get ready for school! (Tons of choices!)

Tons of choices? Why u add clickbait??

Anyways, this didn't have a plot. It was just getting ready for school. I get ready for school every day, so why would you make this? I already know what it's like.

That was lame!!!!

It's okay, but it would be better if you actually go to school.

I don't get the point of the story. It's just about someone waking up, eating food, using the bathroom, and waiting for the bus. You don't even go to school. There are a number of spelling and grammar mistakes, but nothing serious. I don't have that felling of wanting to play it again, which, in my opinion, every story needs.

I really really really liked your quiz, it was really cool, and was super ultra cool Ginnyweasleybooklove

I like the game, and I think it would be cool if you created a game where you actually went to school (Unless you already have one) And also make the choices impact the story more.

You know guys this story is pretty long according to the topic, which is getting ready for school, I mean come on you cant possibly spend a week just to make a story for getting ready for school.

It felt pretty short, but good story, dude!

Thumbs up. I liked it.

I completely agree with Mizal. So...uh...thanks for the free point?

This story is an example of illusion of choice. Nothing that you do matters and has no effect in the outcome of the story.

I disagree with the WC fangirl. This is a pointless mess filled with errors (though to be fair it was better than all the utter dogshit posted at the same time, which is how it's still clinging to existence while the others are gone...)

Though, can't really expect a WC fangirl, and one in the process of writing a WC story, to understand much about the site or be capable of recognizing bad writing. All that cat hair clogging up the wiring in the brain. Tragic, really.

I don't understand why so many people are complaining. I think this story was great, with lots of detail. Not many stories have this many choices, either. Keep up the good work!

It's interesting that this has the raiding 2 and not 1. While true, it has Many choices, because the writer even said so in the title, those choices don't change the story in any meaningful way. You can just skip them, not eating anything and not getting dressed at all, and you will finish the game in exactly 5 click, or 6 counting clicking the end game link. This game didn't have any real characters (we don't even know the name of the protagonist), didn't have a plot. It had only tones of choices, which didn't even do anything.
1/8 probably not going to be unpublished but ah well.

it felt like there was no effort put in to this

Wait what? This dude said it was gonna be long. Ugh

Omg do I even put the effort of a review when you didn't put the effort of a decent game?

How long did you spend writing this? 15 minutes? I think this story clearly and painfully shows a lack of effort. As others have stated, many choices are useless and don't effect anything, the grammar is atrocious in some parts, and the story is extremely short. 2/8, try harder next time.

It was cool being able to play as Tarrare.

Nothing is affected by your choices

This was horrible. Try adding some more options where it changes the story. "Instructive criticism"

Tons of choices...none of which change the story in any way.

So you put a LOT of work in, in the...single day you spent writing this, but none of this included proofreading? What were you working on, exactly?

TIL a ton = 20-30