Greek Labyrinth

Spoilers below. I critiqued this story pretty harshly, but I would like to say it was still very enjoyable.

Grammar-3/8
There were so many grammatical errors, which is concerning in a story this short. One example is when you take Zeus's spear, his name is spelled wrong. There is also a lot of missing punctuation.
It also disrupted the flow of the story when something like "(hint use an item)" was added. The player could have easily figured that out, or you could have just mentioned at the beginning that items would have to be used.

Formatting-4/8
The blue text didn't make me as mad as I expected it would, but the story really would have been better if you had managed to integrate it into the writing.
Instead of leaving a page with no links when the protagonist faces the skeleton, just add an link to a new page in which the protagonist is killed by the skeleton. Dead end pages make a game seem unfinished or as if the author didn't care enough to play through it, even if none of those things apply.
I did like how, when the player attempted to use an item in a place where the item could not be used, it went to a separate page, instead of just saying "this item cannot be used here.".

Plot-5/8
The plot was exactly what it said it would be. The protagonist is in the Greek Labyrinth, and must face some monsters while learning about Greek Mythology. I don't have any issues with it, but I would have liked it to be a bit more unpredictable.
The story also felt excessively short. All the setup for expansion is there, the game really would have been better if it was quite a bit longer.


I'll give this a 4/8. Entertaining and educating, though very short.

I won, solved the easy riddle, giving this 5 out of 8 points!

Only a few endings

300 Points

It was a fun exercise however could focus more on imbibing learning about Greek mythology.

It was ok. I didn't really learn anything new but it was still fun to go through.

I did this as classwork and it was very fun.

I love this game. It is funny, educational, and I can tell that it took a lot of thought, hard work, effort, and time to make this game! I like it

Its a short simple and fun game i enjoyed it

i thought it was going to be boring it kinda was not it was fun and educational at the same time but it was a little short i would of liked it if it was a bit longer.

i thought it was going to be a game not something that's like a game but without the you know the codes like characters and arrows.