Player Comments on Horror House

This game was a nice surprise!

This game was pretty well written. It is not very long, and having a bit more story and description would really make it a lot better. It seems that there could be a lot more of a build up in each room to make it a bit more creepy. Also, it seems that almost immediately upon investigating anything, the story ends. Perhaps playing the consequence out a little more before the ending would help.

For a short game, this game does a fairly good job with the branching. There are multiple endings, as well was multiple paths through the house.

Overall, I enjoyed this game and found it fun.

I survived! I think... Well, this was certainly quite a creepy game, and that is of course meant as a compliment in this case. The writing was quite engaging and served it's purpose in making the reader choose their choices carefully, not sure which one would lead to quite the unsavory path for the protagonist.

I must say that I immensely enjoyed this game.

I think that you are really capable of a better story. The problem is that about the time we are about to get immersed into the story you end it abruptly. Let the suspense build. We should wander around the house for a few pages, or whatever the user chooses to do, with only subtle oddities and serving as additional foreshadowing. When the horror begins let us wallow in it for a bit before you conclude. Give us a few more pages of options as we try desperately to survive. You want us to say something like, "I should have seen that coming!" or "What! wow, what was that?" For the first don't be too predictable and for the second don't be to crazy. Choose a few horrible things to be in the house and be consistent; otherwise it becomes random and we can't get into the story. I look forward to seeing more work from you.

REALLY fun, and I enjoyed it immensely! It was creepy and slightly scary. Overall, it was a pleasant surprise. Now for the criticism: like I said, REALLY fun, but it could use some improvement. First off, if you pick heads and go into the kitchen, the link to the bottom stares is broken. Secondly, some of the endings are super abrupt and feel very rushed (e.g. the part where John attacks you for some unapparent reason, leaves me feeling VERY confused and wondering if its Jhon or some monster masquerading as Jhon); a little more detail and explanation could fix this. Finaly, it could benefit from more backstory of the two characters. 6/8 Great game!!!!

I'm going to be honest. this wasn't a very good story, as a lot of it seemed rushed, and almost every choice i make after the first few pages make me die. Although, the deaths are very creative, and it's a good idea for a story. I just wish there was more to it.
Overall, probably a 3/8.

There were a variety of gruesome endings, but I would have liked to see some backstory about the house or the two characters. Also, some rationale for the horrors within would have added to the story. There were no grammar errors I could see but the writing didn't pull me in. One link from the kitchen seems to be broken,

Epic

vert scary

Horrifying, I enjoyed it.

fine

Umm.. that's it?

(SPOILER ALERT)

Human bones, sleep in the kitchen, and the other guy dies or something. And then you leave? Hmm. Thought there would be more to this story game.

well that was dumb, i died within 2 minutes..... like why did John kill me? wwhat could hae happened to him that was so bad in that little bit of time?

Good- Apart from, too short. Should be more of an adventure.

I lost every time

The adventure was realistic and scary, loved it. Maybe we could collaborate sometime.

Damn, that was creepy. There isn't a truly happy ending, is there?
More details and perhaps a longer length would have made the game better. Still, seems to be an okay game in the horror category, so 4/8.

I thought it was great! Don't know why it doesn't have a better rating.

I survived but John is now an old man

Bizarre.

It's like reading every R. L. Stine book in one night, but hay, his books,

I HATED IT

A decent house of horrors although I wish I had some way to fight back against the monsters so it would feel more fair. The writing was good though and I enjoyed the pictures, though it would be nice if there were a few more. The sudden endings, the inexplicability of the monsters (is there a mad scientist in the basement making them) and my helplessness against them were the only downsides for me, overall fairly good though.

Great story. If you choose to stay in the first room the story is a bit short, but it isn't too bad.

Far too short for my liking.
Nearly all the endings lead to death, insanity, or something else bad, there should be a few more neutral/good endings to make it more engrossing.