Player Comments on Little Fighter 2: Julian

Meh. There weren’t a lot of actual choices for this story, but overallbit was foot. Some grammar mistakes though.

— Garett on 12/28/2017 11:17:30 PM with a score of 0

Srsly only 1 choice lame

— CeruleanFlare on 12/13/2016 10:40:26 PM with a score of 0

I wish I could have rated this higher! Your style's pretty good and your grammar has half the website beat. Next time integrate some more paths and you should be good!

— bilbo on 4/7/2016 11:34:24 PM with a score of 0

Could there actually have been some choices?

— lolitup4 on 3/11/2016 2:01:48 PM with a score of 0

If you want to write fan fiction with no choices, don't do it on a choose-your-own-adventure site. FanFiction.net is a good place for this, not CYS.com.

— GMB13carat on 7/10/2015 7:40:14 PM with a score of 0

Too few choices. (Sorry, I'm just checking out your games) XD

— Penworth on 6/12/2015 12:16:40 AM with a score of 0

How come there is only like three choices IN THE WHOLE GAME!?!?!?

— Meadow on 5/18/2014 5:46:08 PM with a score of 0

Are you kidding me...? You gave us a storygame and you actually say in the description "No game play involved" and "you can't lose" yet you really expect us to find this an "enjoyable read"?

Have you -played- a good game or read even a mediocre an interactive fiction lately? I know I've said before that gamers today want to be babied, but this is just ridiculous. I play games for a CHALLENGE. "Make one choice and you win" is honestly the most boring concept for any game I could possibly imagine.

— Kiel_Farren on 5/1/2014 11:19:26 AM with a score of 0

I was suprised that I won the game by clicking one choice.

— EarthCollision on 3/9/2014 12:32:04 PM with a score of 0

5/8

— jack10345 on 9/13/2013 10:28:47 PM with a score of 0

Nothing too exceptional except that I sort of want to play Little Fighter 2 now... That's KIND OF good, right?

— ISentinelPenguinI on 6/24/2013 8:52:10 AM with a score of 0

I want my choices dammit lol

— kamigreed on 6/11/2013 1:22:19 AM with a score of 0

Too Boring. You should try getting advice from one of the guys whose storygames have been featured.

— harrypotter on 5/13/2013 10:09:09 PM with a score of 0

Yea...ok then....

— DarthNelly on 4/22/2013 12:00:50 PM with a score of 0

A free point given for less than a minute. Thanks :]

— toni on 4/7/2013 2:17:42 AM with a score of 0

You have the ability to write a good story. I want to see you do it. A few things, when you do write it from the perspective of a character who actually does something, the villain in this story really just chills, and, of course, give us some options to work with.

— ugilick on 4/6/2013 10:57:54 AM with a score of 0

Give me some choices, now.

— Swiftstryker on 4/3/2013 1:28:18 AM with a score of 0

Honestly, I think you could've at least have grammar checked this, it wasn't especially long.
That aside, the plot was shallow, all I knew was that I own a tower, I for no reason destroy villages, and heroes try to kill me.
The only redeeming factor was that it WAS decently well written, and I'm sure that if you write a serious game you can make a good one.