Player Comments on Losing and Gaining Love

Good story! Way too short and let's be honest, "to be continued" is SUCH AN UNPROMISING ANNOYING CLICHE- AND it's an excuse to publish an unfinished story. So because what you already have is really good, it just needs expansion, please do that!!!!
One more thing- I liked the way I heard a great writer put this, and I'd like to share this little wisdom with you as you write more games in the Love and Dating category:
Don't ask your readers to be sad.
Just as an example, the part that you write "happy memory" and later "sad memory" is literally telling the reader that you're trying to set up a scene with a certain tone that will invoke very touchy, personal emotions. As writers it's our job to put emotion that we've personally connected with from real life experience into our fictional story. Once you do that, the deep seated emotion will come out naturally and your readers will be able to share those emotions with you as they play your game.
Thanks and please keep writing! :)

i dont really get it but the sister reveal was cool. so good that

All the choices don't really matter, but it was a nice story otherwise

I need more of this story it was wonderful

Rlly sweet! Madee me cry a llittle bit... :(
Pls make Part 2! I'm DYING to find out what happens next! ^-^

It was so good! Love the storyline and the attention to detail. I want more!

Amazing story! I call tell the author put a lot of thought into this. But seriously, the 'to be continued' almost killed me. If you're going to write a good story, at least finish it.

What!? To be continued?! Nooooooo!!!!

I rated it lower due to the ending. The introduction of a new character was clumsy. It didn't roll like the rest of the story did. If you decide to fix the ending, please let me know.

Please release part 2 please. I really like the story.

So-so. Not too impressive, not too shabby.

Good spelling and grammar. Excellent plot, very good story.

The ending was really good. Please continue?

OMG...YOU BETTER MAKE ME ANOTHER BEFORE I GO CRAZY!!

This is a beautiful story. Please continúe

I need more...

Fairly good, had some parts that I wished were put into more detail but overall good.

It was a little short but intriguing. A longer squeal to explain some things and show what happens with Macy would be cool.

Great story, but it was still too short for my taste. I wanted more. I wanted to know what happened to the woman whom he loved, and if he was going to spend more time with Macy Johnson (the younger sister).

That was... really good actually. Great job. Continue it, please.

I loved it! It's sweet and you should make another one unless you already haven't!

Its only bad point is... it's too short!!

Touching.

Nice story, I'm excited to see where this goes with part 2

Love what's there so far but I wish you'd written it as a full story instead of part of a series. There's a few mistakes in it that could do with correcting though, like I ordered tulips from the florist and on the next page I had roses. That said, it's still a brilliant start of a game and I hope you do make a part 2 sometime.

Great story and writing, would be better if it was longer though.

Great story!

Very nice story! I hope your next stories will be as good, or even better!

My name is Harris and there is someone named Mr.Harris. yay

Not the best

Great game! Can't wait for number two!