loveless

'u love someone what will u do?'

(obviously, kill her and start a group of mafia and kill people who don't vote for Donald Trump and is an Asian who loves Hitler... Then go back to your normal life to get a girl from a bar and confess to her saying 'eye luv u mary moi!1!1!!')

No seriously, this slowly kills me inside.

Wow.
Just...
Just wow.
Don't even bother playing this game..
It's only...
Just WOW.

"u confess to her. the end."
I... I don't even... *facepalm*

All I'm going to say is PROOFREAD.

this was horrible! Should leave the girl!!

this is a very weird stoy that's 5 lines long if u ant to add entertainment watch me on bgt.

Wow I confessed I love her OMG

You have told me everything I ever wondered about the timeless and beautiful intricacies and mystery of love... you have educated me in a way that Shakespeare, Keats and Fifty Shades of Grey never could... incidentally u should be spelt you. It's not that hard: Y-O-U. Remember this advice and after this story is deleted your next story might show some improvement. To see other ways you could improve your writing style I suggest consulting the Help&Info Articles on here starting from the top and going through each one to the bottom because almost everything could be improved in that "story" :)

How is this even "advanced editor" anyway?

I don't even know where to begin. Uninteresting, nothing to it, mind-numbingly simple. I would say it's dull ,but it was too short to be dull, and there's nothing to it. I'm having more fun writing ths out than I did playing it, ashamed I couldn't give it a lower score.