Player Comments on MAG the college years, sopohmore year

For the one with the choices: flank him, shoot him, or stand there I chose stand there first

— TitanOfShadows on 1/21/2016 7:24:59 AM with a score of 0

1/8. As in stay far, far away.

The grammar and spelling was still bad. Next time, I suggest getting a better spell checker. Unless you want to explain to me what the faight of the world is?

Aaand it is still horribly linear. No one likes a story that pushes you along one single plotline. Expand!

No one likes random choices either, and a lot of those scenes with the terrorists were just that - random choices. Give us some background or at least something to help us make the choice, and it would be more fun.

— AllThatIsGold on 1/10/2016 12:40:41 PM with a score of 0

i cant pass it

— ElyjuhhLuvaa on 10/16/2015 8:19:21 PM with a score of 0

Do I even need to explain to you how bad this one really is? 1/8

— Creature on 4/10/2015 2:20:13 AM with a score of 0

Not a great story and particularly uninteresting for the people who aren't in it :)

— Will11 on 3/9/2015 8:56:25 AM with a score of 0

I think my IQ just dropped...

— Chris113022 on 1/24/2015 5:32:24 PM with a score of 0

Meh.

— betaband on 12/14/2014 10:44:44 PM with a score of 0

This is awful. The spelling and grammer is so bad it is impossible to read the story properly as a result.

— Jordi P on 10/2/2014 11:40:23 AM with a score of 0

There weren't many choices.

— bilbo on 7/27/2014 2:37:00 AM with a score of 0

So bad u can't call it bad

— crib on 6/30/2014 11:24:33 AM with a score of 0

... You should get a new Spell Checker :p

— Tanstaafl on 12/17/2013 10:51:27 PM with a score of 0

...

was very confused, and the spelling and grammar were terrible. there actually is a space after a comma, like that.

— epiclab on 5/22/2013 4:38:36 PM with a score of 0

just as bad as the last one

— JamesValkyrie on 3/19/2013 3:40:44 PM with a score of 0

... Is it just me or does JJJ talk nothing like that? :p

— Briar_Rose on 11/23/2012 5:55:02 PM with a score of 0

Quite interesting

— RobustSporadic on 6/1/2012 11:14:07 AM with a score of 0

Horrible grammar, more than I can follow. Very linear with little choices.

— fergie14233 on 1/8/2012 9:45:38 AM with a score of 0

Let me be honest, I didnt finish it. Its not that the story line was borring, its that the writing style and poor grammer made it a pain in the ass to try to read.

— ugilick on 8/10/2011 4:37:26 PM with a score of 0

I can't say I like it.

— Killer999 on 5/25/2011 11:24:15 AM with a score of 0

Better than the last one, but still boring.

— tgsunrise on 5/11/2011 6:17:58 PM with a score of 0

it wasn't a very good game, but i gave it a 2.......

— orangelilly on 7/26/2008 8:53:36 PM with a score of 0

The others are right about it being linear and the grammar, but I also don't like instant death links with no logical reason.

For example: There are 2 doors. Door A and Door B.

Go through door A
Go through door B

You go through door B but it was the wrong door. You die.

— X8-Bliss on 6/4/2008 2:53:47 PM with a score of 0

Well...not really that great.

— weedy on 10/16/2007 4:43:24 PM with a score of 0

Average.

— Rommel on 4/1/2007 6:19:42 PM with a score of 0

Hmm, Iraq?

— PrinceOProvidence on 12/22/2006 3:00:59 PM with a score of 0

Too linear. The grammar is horrible. Sorry but I don't like it that much.

— October on 10/13/2006 3:36:00 AM with a score of 0

I like how you incorporated different people from the site into the story. However, the punctuation and the way certain random words are capitalized, as well as the fact that the dialogue is just all run together, make it a very difficult story to make sense of.

— madglee on 9/11/2006 9:36:48 AM with a score of 0

I was the spellchecker and didn't even get to check it for spelling errors before he released it,lol!

— Leon101 on 9/4/2006 3:39:45 PM with a score of 0

SERTANLY A GOOD STORY. VERY ENJOYABLE.

— ADEN on 6/16/2006 7:47:46 PM with a score of 0

It's not bad!

— wdyw on 5/19/2006 11:05:18 PM with a score of 0

It's good. However, it recieved one less ranking than the previous game because the grammar was kinda worse.

— J Dog on 4/5/2006 10:29:33 AM with a score of 0

Too linear

— Korrigor.com on 3/27/2006 7:59:58 AM with a score of 0

Its way to linear. You have a great story going but It's not a game, its just a book.

— JJJ on 3/25/2006 7:06:45 PM with a score of 0