Player Comments on Roman

Very good game with full detail and character support. I see you took your time and I like it!

I have too say, this is one of the better storygames on this site. I liked playing it a lot.
6/8.

The game was excellent but the story was way too short.

All bone, no meat.
Oh and the dialogue doesn't flow naturally, it feels like robots are talking.

Not Bad Not bad at all...

Decent story. Well written. I would liked to have seen more options branching out into different story arcs, but apart from that not bad at all.

I... i had to kill one... NOOOO

Alright but would be better if it was longer.

Pretty fun story. The story itself is not too deep, but that is all right. It was decently informative, while taking a few creative liberties about the history. It was a story fueled by testosterone, and I am okay with that.

It was a good story but there were many flaws. The grammar was bad throughout with a mix of Latin and overall it was very simple.
The pictures were inaccurate but good looking.
The fighting was also flawed in the fact that you would be stabbing someone in the shoulder and they somehow pick up a random sword and "charge" you as if you were not currently stabbing them. In the Colosseum I spotted the fact that I apparently had a sword even though my inventory was empty.

There is a debate whether the "Thumbs Down" actually meant death but other than that overall this story is a good one with vary amount of choices to suit your needs.

Its a great game, and well written story. 7/8

It was a bit short, but not a bad read.

many typos that would be fixed with spellcheck or similar, many grammatical errors.
somewhat interesting idea, but needs major development

1: A legion is not 6000 men but around 4400
2: many typos
3: I doubt a Roman would say “"Yea. Im fine.”

Really uninteresting

I end up with both women? Rome indeed! :P Needs another page or two I think but I liked it.

Rather nice,really short though.

I love the imagery in this story. The plot feels kind of forced (especially when you return to Rome), but the fight descriptions are excellent.

amazing pictures from Spartacus I forgot what the movie was called but u used names from it loved the story though

Very interesting story idea and great use of pictures, however due to the story being too short, it feels very linear, there is barely any character development, the change in scene to being a gladiator feels too sudden.
Overall, it feels that you made fast food with top grade meat,
still tastes great, but wasted a lot of wasted potential.

You had a good thing going there then it went south....very abroupt ending

Loved it, great fight scenes, realistic yet interesting plot, loved the use of pictures, and its not one of those games where you have to be selfish to live.

PS: loved my ending, i call it the 3-way ending!!

Thought it was brilliant but way too short

The characters weren't really developed

YAY! I GOT BOTH GIRLS!

i like your story very much. i also bekeive in chivalry, wjich i only broke once in this story to kill the first cabin girl, but i got to fight to the end without being a panzy and running. usually in other stories you die from that course pf action. good job ******

I liked you use of pictures, but your story was not that impressive, and there was some spelling errors. 5

ARE YOU NOT ENTERTAINED, ARE YOU NOT ENTERTAINED! WELL FUCK YOU, IM GOING TO GO HAVE A THREESOME!

a lot of spelling errors,and kind of short,but great story and choices

Nice

Really great use of pictures and items. Nice job.

Not a bad story overall.There were many grammatical and spelling mistakes but other wise well done!

It was very good but there were some confusions like when I got captured in the Celt home it said the woman looked about 20, but when I held the sword/knife to her neck it says 'you focus your attention on the OLD lady. A 20 year old is not and old person. And when I kill Cynthia I say 'You saved my life. I needed to return the favour.'to Brina. Cynthia saved me not Brina. And when I kill Brina I say 'You the only person i ever loved.' which okay I guess but you should switch them around since it makes more sense.

only wish it was longuer

it was good

Liked the historical content.

very good story

good story

I love this story! The only downpart was the minor spelling mistakes.

It would have been better if there were links instead of item uses, but other than that this was good. 5/8

I loved the ending.

Spelling errors, other than that it was great. Bo approves.

I LOVE IT!!

Lmao best ending... 2 different girls :D sick game

One of the best I've done so far

It was awesome.

It's okay but the pages are rather long. I would have liked it if there were more choices on each page , but thats just my opinion.

This was awesome I'm begging you to please make a sequel as awesome as this one! You seriously have talent.

I liked it very much, I got all 3 endings!

Wow. I wish I knew that the editor could make a player drop items. That would have come in handy. Thanks for reading and rating! Im slowly getting the hang of this advanced editor.

Prefix: You can use the editor to make items drop! Use the little yellow bag to the left of links.

Your stories come out really quickly, you go from planning to writing to publishing very quickly. Pause between writing and publishing! You need to fix your tenses and spelling. It's really distracting and detracts from your work. Particularly when jumping from narrative to description, you hop from present to past and this is VERY distracting. Ruins the unity.

The story was cool but I felt like I was playing through a conglomerate of the movies CENTURION and GLADIATOR. You really lost me once I was made into a Gladiator back in Rome. I felt like it didn't flow with the story. The Romans weren't so impulsive in their decisions.

It wasn't bad at all though, good effort and my favorite of yours. You have tons of potential, just work a little harder on the gritty parts of writing.

wow. You def. put alot of work into this one. I loved the way you developed your characters. I only died twice before I made it to the end. You also made me make a really hard decision at the end, which I liked. All in all a good story. 7 out of 8!

That was a goodd game.