Player Comments on School Simulation

Very, very short. The author could improve on this. Like, the general idea is good, but i feel this was half-baked.

Not bad. It could use some improvement but pretty good. Keep on the good work

That was it? I went throughout the day, turned in two homework assignments, studied, and then it was done? Very short, and not entertaining. It's an okay start, and the memes are funny, but I wouldnlove to see it expanded and have choices mean something.

Was fun, and the use of items gave me a game feel. The pictures/memes were a funny touch. Short and quick, but a 5/8 for me :).

Eh, at least it was semi-well written.

Short and stupid

It could have been better and where do you use the backpack.

What the crap is this crap! This sucked so bad my grandma had a heart attack and a stroke at the same time just from looking at it.

Dull.

Err... No. Its to short really, not many choices.

I love how simple this is while still being entertaining. Nice usage of memes.

Eh. Pretty god School Simulation Game. Meh.

Meh, for a first game or an attempt at testing out the advanced editor, it's not bad. ^_^

Funny pictures and reminded me why I found school so boring :) Good work

Meh. Barely did anything and was too short. 2/8

Meh.

Hello Saykeos! I see the CYOA community liked your project more than most of our class. That is great! Hope you have a good day & see you Monday for the Cold Mountain Assignment!

Heh, not bad. Still, it would've been nice if it was longer and included more classes, just not B. Stats. *Cowers*

Found no use for the items. Too short, but you put in some effort! It was kind of entertaining.

This had the potential to be a fun game, but it felt kinda meh-ish. There weren't that many real choices to be made, and they didn't influence the ending of the story much (which is kind of a big deal for CYOA stories...).

I'd furthermore advise you to write some more descriptive text on each page. A few lines per page is in my opinion too little to suck the reader into your story.

The memes that you use were a nice diversion, but were mostly distracting from the story, as they were literally larger than the texts on the pages.

I've given your story a 4/8, though it's on the low 4-range.

Whose line references and genuinely amusing memes. I am happy. Overall, 5/8.

Chris, apparantly some kids wrote some writing assignment here.

This game was very bland, but, as others have stated, certainly not the worst. Just wish for more choices and maybe a bit more a plot. I give you a D+.

That was alright. It could've been much longer, and wasn't really a simulation, but it was a nice journey through college.

What the fuck is it with all these new stories coming in? Whoops, heh, need to do a review, not wonder why there's so many new fucking stories.

Eh, it wasn't the worst, but it's definately not the best. The grammar was okay, with some minor mistakes here and there, and the fact that you put over-sized pictures on each page and didn't try to resize them really took away from the immersion of the game. In fact, some pictures didn't even make since, like that "Let's eat grandma" one.

There was no real plot, just an average school day in college (I really wouldn't know, considering I'm still in middle school). There was no real goal here, like get an A in all classes or something, where you had to play some mini-games involving variables, and some items, or just give us a quiz on each subject and see if we get it right. You could even give us a cheat sheet item (Like a hint that solves the problem for you), but you only had two, and each quiz had 5 questions on it, and there's no way of obtaining more of them.

Anyway, this wasn't bad, but it's in need of some improvement. 5/8. If I were your teacher, (Because apparently all the new stories are for some kind of assignment in school) I'd give you a C- on the assignment.