Player Comments on Splice Girls

Um I didn't understand this game.

Terrible. This should be taken down

"You go out the door and take a long drive somewhere...", what sort of ending is that? :)

Well it was a good attempt at a story however it felt very random and disjointed (Sadly not in the random because it's hilarious and fits the setting way).

Maybe make then next one less disjointed and longer?

I suppose it was good for a school assignment. There were some errors, but not really in the punctuation thing that you were doing, but some capitalization, and you did switch from Splice Girls to Spice girls sometimes. Also, this would fit better in Modern or maybe fan fiction?? I don't know.

It doesn't teach me or anyone else punctuation at all because it doesn't say if i was right or not....

The story made no sense, but wasn't terribly disjointed in terms of plot. Maybe it's just me, but some of the sentences look like they are grammatically correct as well....

It was okay

It might just be me but: i don't get it

The links... Make no sense... At all...

Dude, the scary video was not funny. You could give someone a heart attack, namely me.

:/ = Lost for words. I don't know what to say.

That was… interesting. Why is it in fantasy though?

I think this game should be in the Fan Fiction section instead of fantasy, but I like that it had youtube videos in it... Though I think the Spice up your life video was a lot scarier than the "scary" video :p

The small capsule of humor within warrants the existence of this short writing.

This story is like punctuation right in the semicolon.