Suburban Tales: On the Inside
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played times (finished )
"trek through the forest"
"Make sure not to blink"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.
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You are a young man whose parents have been on vacation for a long time and is on his own inside his house. Take the reins and see where they take you. Will you be a good boy and stay home or go out with your buddies and egg someone's house? It's all up to you with 3 endings to this simple, but enticing story. (READ: Update: This is just a beta of the story, it's not finished! So if certian things don't make sense, you have been warned!) P.S. This is my first story, so tell me what type of action you want to see in later titles! :)
please don't post unfinished games.
on 12/6/2015 9:56:35 PM with a score of 0
-- grammarking on 5/24/2015 2:11:12 AM with a score of 0
That's one lying description.
on 12/31/2014 1:43:12 AM with a score of 0
It's ok, but nothing actually happens. Your writting style is fine and there isn't as many spelling errors as most of the stories on this site. You need to flesh the story out somewhat and build the character up more. A good start, but can't rate highly as it's not engaging in it's current state
-- Jordi P on 10/13/2014 11:40:45 AM with a score of 0
Well the writing wasn't bad and I know it's short 'cos it's just the intro but I guess my problem with it is that I kind of didn't like the character I was playing. Things like window shutters don't make me angry :p
on 11/9/2012 5:45:21 AM with a score of 0
A good attempt.Perhaps your next story will be better???
-- Muse. on 8/5/2012 10:17:16 AM with a score of 0
Not too bad, quite linear though, could lengthen certain pages like the video game or television one
on 8/3/2012 5:07:21 AM with a score of 0
Pretty short, I didn't detect any grammatical errors though, so good job on that.
on 7/5/2012 1:56:03 PM with a score of 0
It seems uninspired. If you look at the best games on this site (like Ducky Park), you will find that they embody everything that is pure and beautiful about the world. Your game embodies the mediocrity of a mundane suburban life. That said, it did a pretty realistic job of depicting such, so it earned a 4/8.
on 7/5/2012 1:32:28 PM with a score of 0
I hope 2 will be better.
I gave it a 5 because it is pretty interactive.
Potentialy a 8 if two is longer and more outside the box.
on 7/4/2012 10:37:54 PM with a score of 0
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