Player Comments on Welcome to Pablo's!

Very overrated.

The length in terms of branching was fine, but the amount of words on each page wasn't. There was little detail describing things, leaving a vague feeling in the storygame itself. The branching was also a bit awkward at times since few of the end pages actually had end links, and not just a link to the first page.

I suppose it's a rather ok way to kill a few minutes, but it's hard to really enjoy it since the characters have little development and the linearity is really annoying.

I'll admit, I did chuckle from time to time, but probably not as much as you intended the reader to.

Grammar wasn't exactly your main focus while creating this, I see. I noticed multiple errors, which is a bit disappointing since it's pretty short. Short stories should be easy to proofread.

It's a lot better then many storygames on the site, but I don't understand how this almost has a 5/8. I'll give you a 3/8.

It's a very entertaining game with a lot of freedom in choices, I love it

THis is what a good game looks like

It is very realistic

It was a pretty good read. It wasn't my type of humor, personally.

My good deed paid off!

Very overrated.

The length in terms of branching was fine, but the amount of words on each page wasn't. There was little detail describing things, leaving a vague feeling in the storygame itself.

I suppose it's a rather ok way to kill a few minutes, but it's hard to really enjoy it since the characters have little development and the linearity is really annoying.

I'll admit, I did chuckle from time to time, but probably not as much as you intended the reader to.

It's a lot better then many storygames on the site, but I don't understand how this almost has a 5/8.

It's really fun it gives a great picture of what it will be like if you work at a restaurant

meh its okay

Felt like it was a poor rip off of inkeeper.

Not too bad... It could be a little bit longer though, and with items and an inventory or something. That would make it a lot better and you would get better reviews.

Loads of fun

It seemed okay. Grammar wasn't that good but it wasn't dreadful either. I can see you won't read this comment as this was published in 2005 and you don't play anymore. But still, I have to say you did try hard to make this. And it wasn't horrible! 4/8

This story was A LOT of fun to play, and I actually enjoyed the vulgar humor involved in most places. It was really funny, and completely my style.
7/8

I enjoyed that story! It was realistic and original! 6/8!

It was a pretty funny and interesting storygame. You managed to write something with a mundane theme without making it boring, which is rarely done on this webiste.

Some of the choices are a bit difficult to make based on the small amount of information we are given.

I like it

Yes I survive pablo's for being "Mr.Nice-Guy

Fun Game!

...what...but...I saved the kid's LIFE! Time to play again!

'Twas okay...

I got to say, I liked it. In the beginning I didn't think I would but your brand of telling a story really made me enjoy it. The only thing that I felt you could have improved on was making the story longer and adding pictures. Other than that, nice job.

6/8

pretty good. good work.

Good, Good. Just need more lol

I didn't know what a bus boy was in a restaurant.

Very good, upbeat and exciting!

Pretty good.

This was great! but i broke the kid's ribs before the bone came out. how did he choke on a bone anyway???

amazing story! just awesome...never had a story like this before...

A-Maze-ing! This should be one of the best!
Go Delebb!

Good.

Cool Game!
I like the realism
Writing style was good!
Welcome to Pablo's

good. 6/8

AWESOME! Smarm command!

Nice and long, and not too linear. A few spelling errors, but otherwise, awesome.

Great idea, but not my type of game. Nicely done, great effort.

That's great! Just like my job!

Very well written, interesting and funny. I thought the final ending was a little bit of a let down, but the variety of other ways to end was great. BTW, if you choose to tell the guy you like the Special best, on that page, if you click on Edith's favor, it stays at the same page. Excellent job!

entertaining and well written. i liked this game, though it needed some pictures and a few more options.
march

LOL! This is so funny! You break the kid's ribs! You mine as well let him die...
Have you been to Moes? I know you intended that Pablo's is Moe's, only way more crappier.

--da Ravemaster

Beautifully written and an amazing game!

great game. full of flavor text and story. congrats on a fine job.

God, I cracked the kids ribs. Awsome game, it is fun and funny to me as well.

Heh heh. Nice game.

Once again... AWESOME! But, I have a question? Can next time, PLEASE make it even more fabulous, with the advanced editor?

I actually liked this game. In fact it was amazing. And coming from me.... well youshould be happy cuz I'm the hardest guy to get good scores from. 9.5 out of 10. The only fault was that, I was just getting into it when it ended.

The language may be a bit over 3, but other thn that, exemplary! One of the best (I think) first games. Very, very good, even for a second or third first game. Awesome!