http://chooseyourstory.com/story/minecraft-online     (Sorry I can't hyperlink)

I'd like to request to feature my comment on Minecraft Online

It was an alright story, it just needed improvement. You should have used better grammar and increased the length of the story. You also left lots of questions in my mind like, "Who am I playing as?" and "What does the cave or desert look like?" I think you should concentrate on description and length, but it still deserves a 4 star rating.

-- Tequila on 11/16/2014 4:55:15 AM with a score of 1

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/tales-from-the-basement

mmmmmuuuuurrrrrrggghhhh.

-- me on 12/30/2013 12:11:44 AM

LOL 10K Dollar in Mexico only 2 Dollar
What the heck my mom married to lesbian -_-

-- RabbitSeason on 12/29/2013 3:20:05 AM

terrible

-- ceebee on 4/14/2013 2:49:40 AM

Allah hu akbar Allah hu akbar

-- Allah on 3/23/2013 6:27:50 PM

Delete story:

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/pant-pooper

Absolutely terrible story, 4 pages long and makes no sense.

Comments for deletion

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/Snow

Worthless .....

-- Arklight on 10/28/2014 1:30:36 PM with a score of 0

ya-ya-ya... I'm Lorde. Cool story.

-- Lorde on 10/23/2014 10:11:26 AM with a score of 0

Recommending comment for featuring

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/What-do-you-Know-About-Spider~2dMan~3f

It was fun but it sometimes answered a previous question in the next question, for example. "Which two game systems was the game Spider-man released on?" and then 2 questions later it ask what the subtitle was on the spider man game(PS1). I wouldn't recommend doing that.

-- Madbrad200 on 6/19/2014 11:24:14 AM with a score of 60

Yeah! That's great! I guess you could be my co-author, if you want that is.

How about, the town find out that Jolly killed a man, and the whole town goes on a riot to slay Jolly.

After the comments on my other story, I think I need a partner to try and help me write my next story? I have a base plan.

Adam Jolly was a worker at Jolly Ranch. He prepared the town's bread and supplied them with water. The town was rather poor and required a lot of help. Adam was always in his workshop. No matter how hard people begged to see him, he wouldn't come out. Some say he hides a lot of secrets, but who really knows?

If you have any questions or interest in helping me out, I will be glad for options. Maybe, a quick paragraph to show me your style of writing. (If you do write a paragraph, try to make it a continued version of this story)

Thanks so much nmelssx! This is really helpful! Now if you guys don't mind, I have a tiny bit of reading to do...

Wonderful copy.

...

I guess that's why it said that I couldn't view my open duel cause of a bug.

Just says this,

Microsoft VBScript runtime error '800a0006'

Overflow: 'CInt'

/My/Duels/duel.asp, line 11

Oh, darn it! Never mind.