Player Comments on What do you wish to remember?

Perhaps it is me, but for the most part I missed the point of this story (stories??), and started to lose focus towards the end of what I assume is the main story line.

There does not seem to be any real narrative connection for the three choices of what to remember. The old man section and the little girl section were meh. Very linear, and just not that interesting.

The alien abduction idea, not bad, but not really carried out very well, and again, mostly linear. Alien abduction can allow for random choices and weirdness, but I was confused by the time I got there, and just didn't care. Perhaps, a bit more work on this particular storyline that includes a better understanding of the main character would have kept me more interested.

I really did not like the no link pages upon death which kept me trapped within the story and made me go back or restart.

As it stands, not really a great game. But, at least for one of the paths, the abduction path, this author took the time to try and actually write a story. There is at least some framework in that one storyline to give it potential, but it just needs more work.

This story from trying to do too much at once. The real path has you abducted by aliens and such and then an alien named puppy rescues you and your girlfriend and it’s really confusing.

I had hard time keeping up near the end due to my loss interest in this strange narrative. The other two paths were where you played as a grandpa constantly yelling and a child whose memories you revisited.

These alternate paths could have pretty much been scrapped to work on the main story since they add nothing to the overall plot other than branching without a fully realized story.

I think if the writing made more sense and the story itself wasn’t all over the place with little to no structure, this would get a higher rating but it’s just a giant pile of nonsense.

The author claims that this "does not have one category." I should add, neither does it have one redeeming quality.

I liked the backstory! Very relatable childhood. And THAT ENDING!!!Nice job, just next time a little longer :)

Some of the paths were a bit longer than I expected. Entire story seemed a bit random though.
Some of the story didn't seem finished. Dead end pages were annoying so please add end game links.

DAT CLIFFHANGER DOUGH

made no sense at all...

Lol the door one

What the heck?

This was a really great story! It was long and detailed. It held my attention and I looked forward to the next page! Great job!

Well... That was interesting. I liked it... I think. Lolz

Not the worst....not the best.....Hmmm

i love myself

Interesting.

I liked it.

Does the grandpa have Alzheimer's or something?

its p good <3

I choose one thing... then choice after choice only one option and end ?!
Really ?

A very neat little storygame. I did notice a few grammar and spelling errors, but not many.