Player Comments on Wolf's Journey

make more happy endings and choices

— anominois on 7/6/2016 4:22:13 PM with a score of 0

fun even though you can die easily should have been longer with more elements

— Vaedyr on 12/7/2010 8:47:07 PM with a score of 0

Short and kind of pointlesss; however, I like wolves, and it wasn't too linear, so bonus points there.

— Jeff on 8/11/2010 4:50:14 PM with a score of 0

Way too short, but otherwise pretty good.

— polishangel3 on 5/16/2010 3:09:27 PM with a score of 0

Not bad. Very short and very easy to die, but quite well-written. Not a completely original idea, but it doesn't seem like one commonly used on this site even if I have seen similar ideas elsewhere. Why is it that wolves are such popular animals to assign superpowers to?

— Trzcina on 12/24/2009 4:29:44 PM with a score of 0

very good, but short :(

— crition on 9/21/2009 5:48:41 PM with a score of 0

cool

— wolfytracker on 9/1/2008 5:40:08 AM with a score of 0

I don't mean to be rude, but the story was really short and went nowhere. I think it could have been a lot better if you had worked on it more.

— Conneth on 4/29/2008 10:11:00 PM with a score of 0

Way too short.

— weedy on 10/15/2007 5:31:36 PM with a score of 0

Great adventure story! There's quite a lot of danger in it, but it was cool!

— goosebumpsreader on 9/9/2007 10:48:47 AM with a score of 0

too quick. I barely got into the story when it was over. I like the idea of the wolf elements though.

— Smallfry on 8/15/2007 12:08:33 AM with a score of 0

lets seeeee..................................LINEAR

— deadly_sinner66 on 8/3/2007 2:25:12 AM with a score of 0

Errrrr......

— quadcam on 4/10/2007 5:48:49 AM with a score of 0

very short game good grammar, writer has a lot of potential.

— chocobot on 3/2/2007 11:39:09 PM with a score of 0

A sprint indeed! Nice break from some of these epics, though I think a picture or two woulda been nice.

— alexp on 3/2/2007 11:28:08 PM with a score of 0

Fast. More of a sprint the journey.

— ktankerous on 1/11/2007 10:58:14 PM with a score of 0

Like Lance said, not descriptive enough.

— PrinceOProvidence on 1/5/2007 8:10:35 PM with a score of 0

The writing is good, but not descriptive enough. Other than that, it's not bad at all.

— Sir_Lancegalawain on 12/30/2006 5:02:02 PM with a score of 0

OOOOOOOOOOO.KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK. That was kinda wierd...........

— Lady*Esme on 11/30/2006 8:38:43 PM with a score of 0

There's already a game about wolves.

— primates_II on 11/14/2006 8:32:13 PM with a score of 0

A nice story, well written and creative. I would have liked it to be a bit longer as the character was just getting developed. Keep it up!

— madglee on 10/31/2006 1:04:04 PM with a score of 0

I would like to thank everyone for their comments, and I am glad you like my writing style. ^^ If I write more short stories, I will try to supplement them with good writing. Thanks again!

— Griffin on 10/26/2006 6:23:44 AM with a score of 0

I know it is very short, but I liked your writing style. I'd be interested in seeing a longer story with some more events taking place in it. Good work!

— tsmpaul on 10/26/2006 3:30:44 AM with a score of 0

I like how you write, keep it coming!

— GodsSlayer on 10/23/2006 6:21:40 PM with a score of 0

Wasn't much of a story, but still has potential.

— SuperHappySmileyFace on 10/22/2006 3:17:07 PM with a score of 0

I agree, too short. Still good though.

— Miccy2000 on 10/22/2006 6:52:44 AM with a score of 0

I liked it. Maybe next time add choices to become fire or earth or air wolves as well. I liked the idea, needs a bit of backstory though.

— October on 10/21/2006 11:06:21 PM with a score of 0

Okay. Needs more of a longer storyline though. I liked how you could become a water wolf.

— Rodney on 10/21/2006 7:28:11 PM with a score of 0

Fun game! Just, it was very short. Make it longer, and it'd be awesome. But, you know "The Changing" is just puberty. LOL Just kidding! Nice game.

— Anubis on 10/21/2006 6:28:27 PM with a score of 0

Seth, this is just sort of a try-out. I'm working on a big adventure, but you ARE right. I will try to get in more background in the sequel.

— Griffin on 10/21/2006 6:26:40 PM with a score of 0

i didn't like that there was only one way to win! it's not a choose your own adventure if you can't choose without dying

— fred on 10/21/2006 6:26:14 PM with a score of 0

It was well-written, but too short. I liked the story idea, and would have liked a bit more background and character information.

— Sethaniel on 10/21/2006 6:23:35 PM with a score of 0