zombie hunter

A sci-fi storygame by whoami12

Player Rating?/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 9 ratings so far

Story Difficulty2/8

"Walk in the park"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level4/8

"Need to be accompanied by an adult"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

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Whoever this is has like 50 alts and a bunch more crap like this primed and loaded. Brave yourselves for the flood, folks.

— Mizal on 9/7/2016 5:21:57 PM with a score of 0

Ooh, a point!

— Steve24833 on 9/7/2016 3:32:29 PM with a score of 0

*letter
Not level.

— Seto on 9/7/2016 2:35:26 PM with a score of 0

I think you should decrease your difficulty rating. It...really isn't that difficult...especially since it's playlength is 1/8.
Also..more description. You can't just tell someone they died. "oh no you died" is not good enough.
You need to work on your grammar as well. The first level in every sentence is supposed to be capitalized. At least do that. Please.

Really, you should take this down, get a more original story idea, have editors, and maybe spend more than a few minutes making a storygame.
Sadly, I doubt that'll happen.
Thank you for the free point anyways.
(And why in the world am I actually leaving helpful stuff? I have no idea.)

zombie hunter

Player Rating?/8

Story Difficulty2/8

Play Length1/8

Maturity Level4/8

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