You are 6102. A vicious, endless war between factions of the Earthling species is raging. The faction Incognita selects nine human soldiers to genetically modify into terrifying weapons of warfare, but the consequences of distorting nature soon become clear. This storygame explores the complexity of what it means to be a human...

Background Information ~

FACTIONS

Animalia ~ A faction of evolved Earth life.

Plantae ~ A faction of sentient plants.

Fungi ~ The often-joked-about faction of fungi-like organisms.

Incognita * ~ A faction of purely humans and machines.

Protista (storytale faction, not one that exists formally)

This is a warrior cats story with many cats to choose from. You will play as a cat from WindClan named Birdkit, and embark on dangerous and twisting plots in this adventure game when warriors start disappearing and a terrifying truth lays hidden as the mystery unfolds.

ALLEGIANCES

LEADER Rainstar – silver ticked tabby she-cat

DEPUTY Daystone – gray tom

MEDICINE

Ferretwhisker – pale ginger tabby tom

WARRIORS

Shrewpond – ginger tabby tom

Patchfur – tortoiseshell she-cat

APPRENTICE, GRASSPAW

Meadowleap – ginger tabby she-cat with white chest and socks

APPRENTICE, PALEPAW

Barkpelt – brown tom

Hedgetail – fluffy black tom with an very bushy tail

Ashbelly – gray and white tom

Featherfur – white she-cat

Whitefoot – dark gray tabby with white socks

Juniperbranch – calico she-cat

Brightcloud – white she-cat

APPRENTICES

Grasspaw – pale ginger tabby she-cat

Palepaw – small cream she-cat

QUEENS

Snowpatch – black and white patched she-cat

Crowclaw – sleek black she-cat

KITS

Birdkit – black and white kit

Mosskit – black and white kit

Henkit – gray kit

Thornkit – black kit with bristly tail and one white paw

ELDERS

Blackberry – little black tom with white spotting

Nettlebranch – old silver ticked tabby

Dewnose – gray tom with a white tinged muzzle

You are a Gallifreyan named Dapperdrintephroses, later nicknamed "Dapper" for short, a young time lord/lady that lived before and during the events of the Time War, and during this time, you will embark on a wonderful, and terrible journey with xem.

BACKGROUND CHARACTER INFO!~
These are the Gallifreyan characters that you should know, and little facts that will be beneficial to the story's progression.

"Sophie"shestromriastis ~ She demands that everybody use her full name. She is extremely confident, and strongly adheres to Gallifreyan laws and codes, and for some reason, she hates pears. I wonder why... 

Thistlpelliklosim, later nicknamed "Thistle" ~ Slightly younger than you, he is likely also the most skilled, and passed academy with a high-soaring grade. He's been your best friend for nearly as long as Bob has.

Lucy ~ Lucy is an ood. Spoilers! 

BOB ~ Your greatest companion of all is your pet Flubble, who loves to hide in the pockets of your uniform, and you carry him everywhere, even if you are not supposed to. You both don't care to remember how you met.

Well, I guess I just have the normal dinner, and family gathering except I'm a vegan, so...Tofurkey this year, and cranberries and stuff. XD owo

Yey. I'm thankful for finding dis site, and being able to read amazing-i-can't-even stories, and making *some* progress on meh stories. :3 , and meeting some really cool ppls. That and having straight A's, but more that ^^^ XD Oh, yeah, I'm going to see that movie Arrival. I love movies like Ender's Game and stuff like Arrival where they talk to aliens, and I love it when little children makes friends with monsters. Idk, it's just a favorite trope XD

>>Yus, mashed potatoes are very good. smol potato :3 << 

There aren't very many pages, but I would like feedback on the overall idea of the story and the layout and such. 

The plot begins when AmyBot, basically your sidekick for the storygame, tells you that you have been selected for a confidential and top-priority mission, and that you must report to Training Room 203 at once. The basics of the mission is that Incognita needs parts for a new experiment to enhance the performance of soldiers immensely. At this point in time, the only function of having human soldiers is to operate weaponry. Soldiers themselves almost never even see the other factions that they are fighting against and almost never leave Incognita. 

The gist is that they need to steal parts found only in the territory of the other factions in order to create the serums to change humans. At the end of the mission, you are selected to be one of the experiment soldiers, and I am still writing the plot from there. :)

I'm basically just here to know whether or not I need to restart this entire thing based on the quality.

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/dracois-ignis

Yes. However, it still doesn't work... although this may be because I'm trying to link 2 pages that are not start pages.

I have created 2 different chapters in advanced editor. Each as a page in it. I want to link the pages, but they are in different chapters. For some reason, it won't work when I select the destination as "Chapter".  How do you create a link like this? Help.