Greencloud, The Wordsmith

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9/28/2009

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8/16/2016 6:07 PM

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218

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51

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1

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2 wins / 2 losses

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The Title Has Been Abducted by Aliens

One beautiful night you were walking home from a casual day at work when strange lights began flashing in the sky. The night camouflaged the alien ship as it swooped down closer, and closer towards you. Without even time to react a green light began to circle around you and a weightless feeling arose. Minutes later you were strapped down about to be probed.

Four possible epilogues!!!


Recent Posts

Does this Happen Often? (A Little Creeped Out) on 8/28/2012 5:12:29 PM

Someone called my house while my Mom was out. I didn't pick up the first time, but then it rang again so I picked up. It was some guy doing an investigation or something, no other details. Apparently someone put me down as a contact, someone I don't even know at all. I told him I didn't know this woman at all and he said sorry for the call.

Just a bit curious if this happens often? I was a bit creeped out by it.


Some Stuff I wrote on 8/28/2012 4:45:58 PM

Wow, pretty amazing. You've done pretty well in capturing my emotions and smacking them around like an upset child playing with a toy, :P. That's a compliment, by the way.


My Second CYOA Preview on 8/28/2012 4:38:54 PM

Yeah, you're pretty spot on about Wilhelm and Raines being uneasy friends. 

I'll check out your story preview.


My Second CYOA Preview on 8/28/2012 4:15:18 PM

Thanks for the advice! One of my biggest errors in the past of writing was dialog. I struggled quite a bit with making the characters seem believable. I hope to beat that with this story. 


My Second CYOA Preview on 8/28/2012 4:03:12 PM

I don't yet have a title for this story, but it's somewhat of a prequel/test for the massive zombie CYOA I wrote about a few months ago. It's a lot smaller than the one the other one I plan to write. Unlike most zombie stories this one's main focus isn't on the zombies, but the characters and their struggle to survive/personalities. It has a small amount of decisions (about 4 each playthrough, not counting deaths.) However, each one impacts the story greatly. Here's a preview.

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"Any of 'em close Raines?" said Wilhelm, an older man in his mid-fifties, his hair already grayed entirely. He stroked his beard, which was thick.
 
"No, at least not close enough to notice us," said Raines who was bent over staring out a window's blinds. His dark blue eyes searched the outside, three moved around the front yarn, clueless to Raine's wandering eyes inside the house.
 
"It's safe then? The kids don't need to hide?"
 
"I can't be sure... Shit! One's getting closer!" Raines then dived below the window, his neck length, messy, medium brown hair bouncing as he fell.
 
"Oh god, I've got my gun ready!" Wilhelm said, his hunting rifle gripped firmly in his hands.
 
"Don't fire, don't fire unless you have to." Raines then rose, peeking through the window quickly. One was on the porch, moving slowly across the floorboards they creaking with every step the zombie took.
 
"How long?"
 
"I'd say he's gonna be here for a bit." Raines made sure to lower his voice, with one of the dead just a few feet away outside the window, he didn't want to risk it hearing him.
 
"Damn... we can't keep living like this Raines, the world has to get better, it just has to." Wilhelm crouched, his rifle still held tightly in his hands.
 
"Just stay calm... don't make any sudden moves."
 
Wilhelm nodded to Raines words, his eyes locked on the window.
 
They both sat quiet for what felt like hours, but really it was only a few minutes. The zombie crept back and forth across the porch, still entirely unaware of Raines and Wilhelm.
 
"Check, is it still there?" Wilhelm asked, "it's gotta be gone by now."
 
Raines raised his head, looking out the window. There it stood, right above him, glaring into the window, it's eyes met his.
 
Fuck, fuck, fuck! Not now! Look away, look away, turn your fucking head and look away!
 
"I gotta do it, I gotta take the shot Raines."
 
Raines was silent, instead making a signal behind his back to halt. He couldn't risk the noise, he couldn't risk all of them coming for them.
 
"Raines it's, it's-"
 

BANG! BANG! BANG! 

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?Just curious what everyone thinks.


Sanity Preview on 8/28/2012 1:37:04 PM

I have a few questions, what's the genre of this storygame? Love and Dating? Also, can you give a quick description of what's it about?

From the preview I can say that I really like your writing style, you use good detail and the story seems to have great potential in being very emotional and touching.


favorite artist (musician) on 8/27/2012 5:54:29 AM

Senses Fail.


What's your favorite comic? on 8/25/2012 6:49:49 PM

Are you fully caught up with The Walking Dead comic?


What's your favorite comic? on 8/14/2012 2:58:36 PM

My favorite comic is probably The Walking Dead. I just started reading it and I love it. I'm also a bit interested in checking out Fables.


favorite show and episode on 8/13/2012 11:20:56 AM

TV Show-Breaking Bad (however I LOVE Game of Thrones and the Walking Dead.)

Anime-Clannad After Story, hands down. I'd say it's better than Breaking Bad as well if you were to ask me which is better.