LJacko, The Reader

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Variable not working on 12/3/2019 7:26:57 AM

Well i made a workaround by using more variable statements it's just customizable in the beginning with like 4 links so i guess that makes it not that massive.

If you want I can let you take a sneakpeak by activating that on my site.


Variable not working on 12/3/2019 6:57:15 AM

I do know that yes but that misses the point in that exsample. If I close the gender one and then do the name one the name shows up for both genders on the page regardless of what you pick in the beginning. It was meant so that if you chose male gender you get this happening to you. If you chose female something else happens.


Variable not working on 12/3/2019 5:43:44 AM

Hello I have a question about variables. Is it not possible to have a  query inside a query? I basically wanna make my text dependent on gender on some pages and when i do this:

%%GENDER%=%1%As you start sipping your coke quite a cute redhead girl, with green eyes, walks up towards you. "Hi I'm Stacy," she tells you with a smile and extends her hand. "I'm %%NAME%=%1%Bradley%%%%NAME%=%2%Jack%%%%NAME%=%3%Chris%%%%NAME%=%4%Ryan%%%%NAME%=%5%Julius%%%%NAME%=%6%Julia%%%%NAME%=%7%Caroline%%%%NAME%=%8%Mia%%%%NAME%=%9%Linda%%%%NAME%=%10%Sandra%% ," you reply quickly. "Never seen you here before. New in town?" she questions you further. "No just normally not one to visit a dance club." As soon as youve finished one of the army guys walks over towards you. He's quite tall and muscular with blond hair and blue eyes. "Hey I thought you'll just grab a drink babe. Why are you talking to this punk here?" He looks you up and down in disgust. Starting a fight with an army guy while his whole troop is here is most likely a bad idea but i don't want him giving me crap. "Shut the fuck up toysoldier I'm talking to a lady," you tell him. "You better watch your tongue punk before I make you regret your words" he spits at you. You again smile smugly,"Make me."%%

It always messes up the part where im letting the character tell his own name.

When I do only the name part on an empty page it works just fine.


The scourge project on 12/2/2019 7:35:37 AM

It is supposed to be a storygame here on the website. I guess I was a bit stupid to call it chapter ^^. It is basically just the first page not the first chapter.

I am glad for you pointing out the grammar mistakes though and I am also thankful for you sending me the link to that grammar website with the apostrophes.

One point though. The character itself is customizable the whole thing with looking in the mirror is just a way for me to describe that your not playing some beauty queen and rather a person being a more run down.


The scourge project on 12/2/2019 3:40:27 AM

Hey people from the other side of the internet. Here is the first chapter of the new story im working on and I wanna hear your opinions and see if I made some grammar mistakes. I am happy about every feedback I get.

Your alarm clock sounds out with the same annoying noise as every day. You groan sleepily and reach out with your hand to turn the sound of for the third time this morning and sigh. You push yourself to a sit and stretch your arms before slowly standing up. Half asleep you walk out of your small room towards the bathroom. You turn on the water as cold as possible and wash your face three times with it to get awake. turning of the cold water you raise your gaze to look at your face in the mirror. Your skin of  fair complexion having a slightly sickly hue to it and your dull light brown eyes seeming a little lifeless. Your rugged, tough features could have been calledhandsome if it weren't for the tangled mess of blond hair on your head. You lower your gaze and sigh again before stretching another time and starting to brush your teeth. As you walk back to your room to get dressed you notice the door of your mothers room is slightly open. Careful to tread silently you walk over to take a peek in. Your mother is laying in bed fully dressed and as always a few empty beer cans lie on the ground. you silently walk up to her bed pulling the bedsheets higher to cover her. Afterwards you collect the cans and leave the room. As you reach the door you hear your mum mumble half asleep and obviously quite drunk, "Stay safe honey." "I will try," you reply to her. You add another, "I will try." This time you whisper so only you can hear and only after the door is closed. You dump the cans into the bin in the kitchen.  You then head to your room and open the closet. You quickly grab ablack shirt and blue jeans alongside your biker jacket and get dressed.

The idea is about a teenager getting into a military program to aford a better life for his mother.


Duplicating a story on 11/28/2019 8:04:53 AM

I have one question since i started writing:

Is it possible to copy a story with all links and variables in tact?

The reason i ask this is because i set up a naming generator in one of my games. Since that takes one page for every letter and 24 links to be created on every page I wanted to ask if there is a way i could create a duplicate of that story, then delete everything that is not related to the naming generator and use that generator for another story. Or do i need to recreate that every time?