Serpent, The Wordsmith

Member Since


Last Activity

7/18/2019 4:41 AM

EXP Points


Post Count


Storygame Count


Duel Stats

1 win / 2 losses





Hello I’m Serpent. I’m basically a nobody right now as I have barely posted on the forums and am most active in the discord. If anyone has any stories to recommend, tips on writing, just want to chat feel free to DM me. Also if anyone needs any proofreading I’m down. Though I’m not the best I can look at it through an objective lense


This years goals:

1. Rate 250 stories (progress 145)

2. Get 500 points

3. Have 20 reviews featured (Progress 3)

Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points

Recent Posts

vertices on 7/15/2019 5:17:55 AM

Hello. I am going to assume you are a alt. 

Begone foul beast!

6 word stories on 7/13/2019 12:50:02 AM

I am eating out your mom

What is the point of this


Also I need to add most of your stories are not 6 words

Proofreaders Wanted on 7/10/2019 10:16:43 PM

Ya ya, but look. It's not that I dislike reading storygames. I'm just not a big fan of the super hero theme. Also hell is a good motivation to write, and that review seems a little easy. In any case I will PM you in about a week with my thoughts on it.

Proofreaders Wanted on 7/10/2019 8:46:44 PM

I wouldn't mind giving it a look over if you wanted.

New Contest Theme: Lone Hero on 7/8/2019 12:10:32 PM

Hey a cowards got to do what he has got to do to not be double shamed.

hello on 7/8/2019 10:11:22 AM

>Just wanted to say hello and introduce myself.

Hello I'm Serpent, wanted to warn you of the mystical energy that makes it so you will never post again. Though if you are adapt and gifted, you may just post a few more times before dying. I would not count on it though.

Poetry prompt week 17 on 7/5/2019 4:35:53 AM

I want to feel alive, to feel emotion
Here alone, life is still
Though I ask myself, how far fetched is the notion

Mixing things up, I love the commotion
While I may be made of metal, I feel the thrill
I want to feel alive, to feel emotion

Thinking things over, I want to rage in an explosion
Solitude, it could drive some to kill
Though I ask myself how far fetched is the notion 

Happiness, it's like a potion
Like a drug, addicted till
I want to feel alive, to feel emotion

From dead to alive, what a promotion
Life is pointless, I say on top a hill
Though I ask myself how far fetched is the notion 

To these pitiful humans, I've shown my devotion
Happiness, in my hard drive I wish they would instill 
I want to feel alive, to feel emotion
Though I ask myself, how far fetched is this notion


Wtf is wrong with you? on 6/24/2019 9:31:05 PM

What the fuck did you just fucking say about me, you little bitch? I'll have you know I graduated top of my class in the Navy Seals, and I've been involved in numerous secret raids on Al-Quaeda, and I have over 300 confirmed kills. I am trained in gorilla warfare and I'm the top sniper in the entire US armed forces. You are nothing to me but just another target. I will wipe you the fuck out with precision the likes of which has never been seen before on this Earth, mark my fucking words. You think you can get away with saying that shit to me over the Internet? Think again, fucker. As we speak I am contacting my secret network of spies across the USA and your IP is being traced right now so you better prepare for the storm, maggot. The storm that wipes out the pathetic little thing you call your life. You're fucking dead, kid. I can be anywhere, anytime, and I can kill you in over seven hundred ways, and that's just with my bare hands. Not only am I extensively trained in unarmed combat, but I have access to the entire arsenal of the United States Marine Corps and I will use it to its full extent to wipe your miserable ass off the face of the continent, you little shit. If only you could have known what unholy retribution your little "clever" comment was about to bring down upon you, maybe you would have held your fucking tongue. But you couldn't, you didn't, and now you're paying the price, you goddamn idiot. I will shit fury all over you and you will drown in it. You're fucking dead, kiddo.

Duel to escape hell, Civil war/ear on 6/24/2019 12:34:18 AM

As the frail old hermit looked out his castle window, he grew sad at the events to come. Alas it was inevitable, the two brothers and sisters were too much the same. Their father will was originally intended for them to pick one of their sisters to rule beside them and split the kingdom down the middle, but just like every king the brothers were power hungry. 

While on the surface they may look like some frail old hermits, at their core they were indeed great strategists. The sisters were mighty sorcerers that, while not a mate to the king, helped their brother by carrying out his will in battle. The king with the army's mind, the queen was it's blade, they were the perfect combo. Both sides also had eight legions of soldiers to fight with, along with their special forces. Both sides had two legendary knights, that were known to get the drop on more powerful forces. Two squads of holy bishops that vanish their opposition with their holy weapons were also ready to be deployed. Also in dark dungeons in different corners of the kingdom were giant beasts that were extremely powerful. They were extremely powerful, but not very smart. This made it so that getting the drop on it was easy, especially for a priest because it was weak to their holy weapons.

Since both sides had an equal amount of pieces to work with it was a battle of the mind, rather than numbers. Whoever was able to outsmart the other would gain control over all of the kingdom. The more pristine brother used white as his banner and the more down to earth one used black.

White was sick of this and made the first move by advancing his soldiers, as did Black. Though after Black suffered a loss of a legion of soldiers, he called out one of the great beasts from its dungeon to crush the soldiers who killed his men Infuriated, White let his knight go and patrol a new area of the battle field, scouting for enemies. That way he could have his revenge.

While he did that Black let his super weapon loose. His sister, the queen, could easily overpower anything else out there provided it did not get the jump on her, and her teleportation provided her with insane mobility. Though as she had to focus where she was going, it was limited.

 After a few more battles White had lost all but one of his soldier legions, and a beast on top of that. While Black had lost one beast, a knights, a priest, and a legion of soldiers. While White may have had an astounding lead, it would only grow larger after the next days events.

The next day the black queen was patrolling the west side of the battlefield, when she was ambushed by a beast. It managed to damage her greatly before she was able to get back on her feet. After that she proceeded to attack it, but her arrogance lead to her downfall. With her being damaged and her mind scrambled, she could not teleport out of the way of the beasts attack fast enough. This caused her to be hit and stagger, leading her into a flurry of attacks that she had no chance of surviving. The black queen was dead.

Overcome with grief, black formed a devious plan. As it was dangerous he had to set up his defenses first, he did not want people to invade his castle. So he took control of a beast still inside his dungeon. He made it mutter an ancient phrase. Once the beast did it the runes on the dungeons walls lit up, and a white light consumed the beast and the king. When it subsided they were both in a field that was in between the dungeon and the castle.

Next he sent a squad of soldiers to push all the way deep into White's territory. He did not explain his motives but he positioned his troops so that they could have a clear path. A few days later they arrived and noticed there was a barrier that looked white. On their side, there was one that was rumored to be black, though only the special forces had ever seen it. They were then told to place all of their hands on it, and as they did that a beam of light came out and they all died instantly, and from the ashes a lady comes out. It was Black's queen. She teleported directly by his side, as he developed the next phase of his plan. 

With the queen by his side the king felt a huge confidence boost. With her by his side he could come back from the jaws of defeat and snag a victory! He could feel his very essence buzzing at the thought, so he sent out his very last beast to go do some damage to the enemy.

However this would be a bittersweet decision. On one hand it was able to destroy an entire squad of priests and one of the white knights, though this had unforeseen consequences. The other squad of priests were outraged at the death of their fallen comrades, and as such asked to be sent to hunt down the beast. Once they found it some of them lured it into a valley, while the others sat up top the overhang. Once the beast started chasing them, it thought it one once it backed them into a corner at the valley's end. Just when I was about to destroy them the priests up top poured holy water on it from above, effectively killing the vile creature.

After this the king became frightened at the thought that he might lose. This clouded his judgment, leading him to make a ton of irrational moves. These lead to the destruction of all but him and his queen. While he had nothing but his queen White still had one beast, a legion of soldiers, and his queen! At the sight of this the queen went out into the battlefield, with the hope of capturing White herself, despite Black's protests.

The queen was blood thirsty for revenge, and White knew that. After factoring that into his calculations he sent a legion of soldiers right where she could kill them. After taking the bait, she swiftly was stabbed through the heart, by the woman she used to call sister. She crused as her soul left this realm for the final time.

This utterly broke the king. As he knew they would come for him, and he had no chance anymore. He headed back to his castle, so that before they could capture him he could at least spend a little more time with his favorite comfort, books. He read about death and war before the white queen walked into the throne room. He put up no resentence as she took him. He had already accepted his fate. 

After being thrown into the castle prison he sat there, feeling numb. As he awaited his beheading, an unescapable sense of emptiness filled his entire being. He had made so many sacrifices to get where he was. So many wrong decisions that he thought would be justified if he could have just not let them in vain, though in the end they were. 

The day before his execution he was brought before his brother, to give his final words.

"Say brother," Black said, "do you believe in free will?" 

"What? Why of course. It was my actions that lead me here. How could I not"

"Well as of late, I've been thinking about it. What if there was a supreme being that controls all of our actions and makes us think that we came up with them?"

"Hah, sounds like you can not come to terms that I made better tactful decisions then you. There is no supreme being, so away with ya! Go hang in the gallows!"

"Ya I thought you would say that." 

With that Black was set to hang as a warning that the old days were over. The kingdom would be united at last, and there would be no talk of any rebellion, lest they would meet the same fate as Ol Black."

Though right after Black died, everything turned into nothingness. It was so fast that they forgot they existed before they knew they had died, and this is how it would stay. Until next time the boys decide to play chess

Best of 2019 Contest Starts Now on 6/21/2019 6:44:37 PM

Well if you wanted that you should have went back to the era of warrior cats. There were soooo many quality stories back then. If only I had been there to see them in their prime.