TheGamerKing777, The Reader
And welcome to my profile: TheGamerKing777
Working now on:
Creating and editing my first story game!
After feedback, what to improve in my story...
Create and publish my first story!
2. Unpublish my story, get my feedback and...
Edit the story again, I am hoping that I will improve my English soon.
3. Get my first trophy!
Recent PostsHello! (Good news) on 1/5/2018 3:14:21 PM
OK, thank you!
Hello! (Good news) on 1/5/2018 3:12:02 PM
Thank you for correcting me on my last post.
I'm so happy that there's people that can help others on their hard time.
And thanks again, I will check the creative forum.
Hello! (Good news) on 1/5/2018 2:57:07 PM
I'm now starting to see more grammar lessons on sites, videos, friends and more.
Because I saw that grammar is my main difficultly on this language.
Hello! (Good news) on 1/5/2018 2:54:48 PM
I will check that out.
Hello! (Good news) on 1/2/2018 11:57:03 AM
I will take your tip as soon as I will need it!
Hello! (Good news) on 1/2/2018 11:55:30 AM
Thanks for the quick feedback everyone!
Unfortunately (and that was true) I am unpublished my story.
You were right.
I am studying English now and some people, even you, spot my grammar mistakes in my story.
Before I unpublished my story, I saw your feedbacks.
All of the feedbacks I got were bad and I knew that some people will write in their feedback only bad things about my stories.
I was a bit disappointed after reading this feedbacks that not include even one thing that I worked "hard" on. (To even start to take a serious thing to do...)
I even thought, if that was worthwhile to create an account and to start writing my stories and some of my expressions.
But a few of you, especially DiniTheWizard and mizal, helped me to know this site better and gave me tips and hope to continue and don't give up!
I would like to say thanks for who was writed more tips, good things and more on the feedback or on the forum.
I will take a break from this site and I will talk to some of my friends and maybe even to you... (Some people on this site)
I am hoping that I will not regret creating this account and even to start writing or feedbacking other stories.
I am having now so many thoughts of what to do next and maybe I wrote some mistakes on this post because I wrote faster to share my thought and to start to take my break.
Thanks again, I will check less often this site and more stories in this site,
Because my break always helped me to think what to do next...
And for the newbies that read this post and joined this site or were edited their first story, please remember one rule...
DON'T GIVE UP AND GOOD LUCK!
Even if it will be hard at the first time, you can do better next time as you learn your mistakes.
Hello! (Good news) on 1/2/2018 10:56:47 AM
Maybe you're right...
I see in the comments, and they are ture.
I am studying English, and... Yea.
A lot of grammar mistakes some people say I have...
Thanks for commenting this.
Hello! (Good news) on 1/2/2018 10:47:36 AM
I published yesterday, maybe it didn't saved?
I will publish again.
I hope that the problem will not return again.
Hello! (Good news) on 1/1/2018 3:03:55 PM
Some of the people maybe remember me.
In 11/11/17 I created a new account on this site and post my first post here, at the Newbie Central...
I received some help from the people that respond on my post and on this "Help & Info" button.
From this date I am worked almost 2 months for my story, I took some breaks and think what to add or change in my story,
What to improve or what to delete in my story.
Today the 1/1/18 in Monday.
I published my new story that called: "The lost coin!"
Please check that out and read my story, don't forget to give me a feedback to help me improve my next stories that I will write in the future.
I hope you will enjoy my story :)
Thank you! ;)
Merry Christmas Everyone! on 12/24/2017 2:45:16 PM
I am hoping that you have too, what you said!