katgirl22, The Contributor

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I'm just a hidden profile in a corner of the internet.

I might get around to writing more on this page...

I'm currently writing a story called Superhero Academy. It's all down there if you want to look at it.

Goodbye, whoever you are.

 

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Superhero Academy
unpublished

It is the year 2040, and the world is in danger due to rampant crimes and powerful villains. Individuals with inhuman abilities are appearing all around the globe.
The government, in a desperate move, enlists the help of some of these super humans to start a 'Superhero Academy', where ordinary children such as yourself can be taught such abilities, and make it into the world as a superhero to protect the citizens.
But first, can you even get through the first year?

 

 

 

 


Recent Posts

The Superhero Academy: please help on 5/16/2018 3:07:39 AM

I've got the whole plot laid out in my head now. About 7 endings altogether, and they blend together quite nicely.

There are choices you make regarding friends in the passing, and I'm using variables- so if you are having a good enough friendship with somebody you can get items for certain endings.

Is it okay if I just tell you the whole plot now???


The Superhero Academy: please help on 5/1/2018 6:07:04 AM

I've fixed the errors and written about the Seminar.

I've kinda got a set schedule going where I jot down what I want to finish tomorrow so I have a goal of some sort.


The Superhero Academy: please help on 5/1/2018 4:34:28 AM

Thanks for the feedback! I'll try out using the variables and see if it works... since it seems MUCH simpler.

Yes, but I really don't get how to use scripting- the article doesn't really help all that much so I prefered to keep it disabled. If I could get a clue on how to use it I would though.

It IS going to be given later. I'm thinking maybe I put a page where it says not to give it.

Thank you for pointing out the error with the foodbars. I'll have a look at that, thanks.

I'm thinking to add more chapters that are accessible once you unlock more items in the game. I'm thinking about putting more superpowers as items so you can USE them when needed, and those will unlock the new chapters?

I'll fix everything and get back to you. Thanks again!


The Superhero Academy: please help on 4/30/2018 1:14:44 AM

I've updated it again, adding the PIPs and integrating some information into it. Also, the books are bought in hard copy from the shop. The shop description has been changed, and I've added books to buy. You can also read the books when you click 'USE'.


Fresh Meat - baiting and hooking thread on 4/29/2018 7:41:22 AM

Well, I wouldn't like to make any comments on this matter. What is true, what isn't??? Depends on what you call a room, in fact...

The speculation, on the other hand, seems quite interesting. I really don't know what else to say...

 


The Superhero Academy: please help on 4/29/2018 6:17:02 AM

Well, just saying I love the handwriting idea. Also, maybe the teachers don't want the students to lose the knowledge of knowing how to write.

I'll mention it vaguely in the passing...


The Superhero Academy: please help on 4/29/2018 4:29:55 AM

Wow, thank you! Yes, I'll definitely keep writing the story!


The Superhero Academy: please help on 4/29/2018 4:16:33 AM

Yes, maybe an older version of the PIP would work well instead of the wallet.

When accessing items in the PIP, I'm thinking just some news, your schedule, the information you got at the shop, your books and of course your credits...

The more real world items would be in the inventory like the bottle and the notebook. I'm actually thinking about the notebook's significance in this futuristic setting. Maybe the school needs notebooks for some reason? I can't really think of a good explanation, as people store most of their info in this PIP anyway.

I'm thinking of the PIP like some kind of a kindle, in fact.

PS. Not mention you? With the amount of effort you've put into the feedback, I'd feel bad if I didn't!


The Superhero Academy: please help on 4/29/2018 12:47:09 AM

It really is useful.

I just noticed a major inconsistency. The credits are supposed to be transferred from PIP to PIP, so the wallet on the ground doesn't seem accurate. Maybe some form of debit card should be in the wallet??

Hmm... Since the information in the shop is very vague, and Lydia just claims everything is a lie- I don't think the MC is shrewd enough to figure out what you did. I'll try to integrate the schedule and the information on the PIP- someway or other...

The shop woman has a character too. She's really greedy and money-hungry. She was paid an amount to spread a certain information among the students, but without the knowledge of her client (so far anyway) she is also charging money for it. She comes into the story later again.

The term Opposition is given to the biggest opposition of the current ruling political party, and it is in that significance I'm mentioning it.

I'm really thinking the PIP should be an item which allows you to access various things you have acquired.

When I mention that Lydia was saving up for a book- I mean a storybook. I think I'll mention the name of the storybook and give the MC the option to buy it from the shop for her PIP and give it to Lydia. Buying books in the shop seems good. Maybe even an extra reading textbook??? Of course, like Ebooks so it goes into the PIP, and you can transfer it to someone else (which is something I think should be included in the kindle).

I pretty much forgot what font I used, I'll check and get back to you. It just goes with the Superhero Academy Logo that I included in the article.

The economy is a little retarded, due to the fact that this is the future and making some things have gotten easier than making others.

Also, thanks for the huge amount of analysis you've done on my story. If I ever manage to finish it, I'll be sure to mention you and the help you've given me.

 

 


The Superhero Academy: please help on 4/28/2018 3:49:03 AM

I've updated the game and revised it. Please take a look!