I'd suggest you put a little more depth in the writing in general if you're serious about making fun of social justice warrior types.
I'm not sure if you're the same person, but some guy on here did a similar story to yours and while it got unpublished because it was coming off as a troll story, it was still sort of amusing.
I'm not even expecting you to write long winded passages, but at least a couple paragraphs per page would be a step in the right direction.
Be sure to remember to include things like mandatory estrogen injections and tranny police armed with 12 inch cyber dicks and ball clipper robot hands that do predictable things to the protagonist if they're caught not obeying the rules.
