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This is my motivation thread for my romance story for EndMaster's contest. I think I may get it done. Who knows it may be good enough to win if no one else submits anything.

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Yes it worked!

Old link expired. Here we go

Finished! Now I just have to edit it.

I admit I'm almost hoping everyone else fails to enter anything now just so End has to give this one the win.

Agreed.

It would still have to meet a minimum standard of a 3 rating and you're not taking into consideration that I'd just throw everyone in the SHAME pit and declare no winner at all.

End, please. You don't understand. We NEED this story on CYS.

Well he says he's editing still, and either way I will give it extra points for...enthusiasm and...sincerity.

I thoroughly enjoyed the ending I got, so that's something.

So it's not good enough?

Well, you're still in the editing phase so I'm taking it as more of a rough draft.

What could I do to make it better? Besides the spelling and grammar because I'm fixing that.

I'm not giving advice on the plot except to note that it seems very very emo and over the top tragic, but if that's what you were going for than don't change it. Spelling and grammar do need a lot of work though and there's a few places early on at least where you switch from second to first person.