Baseball Career

Abrupt ending. Kind of sad.

Ummm...

Make sure you differentiate "Retire" pages. You seem to get the same basic conclusion no matter what. It doesn't really make sense.

A cool idea. Expand on it and smash a few bugs. The more layers you put into this game, the better it will be. If decisions other than contract signing were included, that would be fantastic.

This game certainly has room to be improved upon. There are a couple grammatical errors (you should really split your writing up into paragraphs) and the game itself is very short, at least in the storyline that I played, but if you would expand upon it, making it longer, adding in events that happen in the career instead of just telling me what happened, then this could end up being a very, very enjoyable game.

3/8

The only thing that really pesters me about stories is the lack of length. I know it takes time to make a longer story, but it is worth it.

My apologies on errors, I will fix those as soon as I have time. Yes, it isn't possible to hit 792 home runs without playing a game. I'll also be getting on adding new teams and situations as soon as I can. Remember to report bugs as soon as you find them, and I'll fix them. Right now I'm planning to add 3 new teams, haven't decided yet what those teams will be (I'll take suggestions!) and I am going to add a new college track, and a new retirement track, along with other bug fixes and such. Thanks for playing!

It's very short, and the ending seems to be pretty much the same no matter what.

It says I never played in the bigs even though I hit 792 home runs a grand slam in my first game in the major league. Does that make any sense to anyone?

A good start with a lot of room to expand. Maybe being able to play in important games with opportunities to use/build your skills. Another idea would be to add some off-field events to advance the story.

Good, original ideas here. Here's hoping there's more.