Dear Santa
A
modern
storygame by
Leafmaggio
Player Rating
2.73/8
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
Based on
62 ratings
since
Played times (finished )
Story Difficulty
5/8
"Run through the jungle"
Play Length
2/8
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
Maturity Level
5/8
"Aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
Tags
Humor
A letter...a game....a lifestyle
Player Comments
Do:
Delete the introduction (that was random);
Capitalize words correctly;
Break down large paragraphs;
Make some conflict;
Make choices logical (unless you had wanted to emphasis the humor of it);
Make it more humorous (because I didn't find it very funny)).
Good:
Background information;
Writing skills (very nice writing ability).
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Crescentstar
on 12/11/2016 11:40:34 AM with a score of 0
What... what was day ending, do? Larb
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— Tarbo134 on 7/13/2017 1:15:49 AM with a score of 0
Sorry. Not much to the story. It didn't grab my attention and take me away. When I read something, the best way to get a good rating from me is to take me to " Readerland", make me smile/laugh/cry. I was stuck in reality. Thank you for trying. :)
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Quorrah
on 1/23/2017 2:40:49 PM with a score of 0
Yes! Loved it
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AlexTERRARIAN
on 10/25/2016 3:40:01 PM with a score of 0
It could have been longer
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corgi213
on 11/7/2015 7:38:40 AM with a score of 0
Eh, this was wierd
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Warriorcatadventures
on 9/8/2015 1:52:41 PM with a score of 0
Eh..Short, but okay. There's not enough ways to go yet.
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GiraffeDino
on 7/11/2015 7:18:21 PM with a score of 0
To quote Chris and TheDickReviewer, at least it ain't warrior cats.
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PortalSpartan
on 4/28/2015 7:22:03 PM with a score of 0
Choose your own BORDOM! I give this game a 1/8. Uhhh..... it's alright. I guess. I won Christmas, so it can't be THAT bad. It's pretty much impossible to loose.
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— Pinkiepie4449 on 4/2/2015 10:42:45 AM with a score of 0
To quote Chris, at least it's not warriors.
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TheDickReviewer
on 12/16/2014 7:06:59 PM with a score of 0
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