Dragon Survival

A mystery / thriller storygame by pebble

Player Rating1.34/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 13 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty4/8

"March in the swamp"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level2/8

"Choking hazard for children under 4"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.

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Every page is one sentence long. :/

— CastIron on 12/4/2017 5:48:26 AM with a score of 0

Such a marvelously written terrible storygame.

— TharaApples on 12/3/2017 7:28:06 PM with a score of 0

Wow. I'm getting the feeling you didn't try at all. There's no content, no effort, just...nothing here.

— ultraoverlord on 12/3/2017 6:39:13 PM with a score of 0

Oh dear. How unfortunate.

A longer (MUCH longer) story with less reliance on random silly things, and definitely more proofreading is going to do a lot better here.

This one is definitely going to wind up unpublished, but, I don't get the sense you spent very long on it anyhow so it's not a huge loss at least.

Remember when writing your next story that there's no rush to publish it. Take as long as needed to make it polished and complete.

— Mizal on 12/3/2017 6:09:17 PM with a score of 0

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Dragon Survival

Player Rating1.34/8

Story Difficulty4/8

Play Length1/8

Maturity Level2/8

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