Lord of the Flies sample

A fan fiction storygame by laypay

Player Rating?/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 8 ratings so far

Story Difficulty2/8

"Walk in the park"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level4/8

"Need to be accompanied by an adult"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

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it was ok, but random, no way to win, you only die, either path you choose you end up in the same place, and i haven't read the book, but i think the piglet's supposed to be my friend.

— fergie14233 on 1/24/2011 6:59:23 PM with a score of 0

While your writing is good, and you do a great job of mimicking Golding's style, there just isn't any substance to this story at all. Too short, and not true to the book. Piggy wouldn't attack me for that. I felt like you quickly lost inspiration.

— JJJ-thebanisher on 12/9/2010 6:59:48 PM with a score of 0

I've done everything possible to finish it. Is there even a way to do so? You have an excellent writing style, great grammar, but I died to the pig horde, the T Rex, and the boys eating me, not to mention the squid. Hints?

— Poet on 12/8/2010 11:59:39 PM with a score of 0

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Lord of the Flies sample

Player Rating?/8

Story Difficulty2/8

Play Length2/8

Maturity Level4/8

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