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A family friendly storygame by schrojan

Player Rating2.96/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 12 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty4/8

"March in the swamp"

Play Length5/8

"Not going to lose any sleep"

Maturity Level3/8

"Must be at least this tall to play"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

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Warning the emperor path is the only one currently done.I have not finished the others i just want to see if it is a good idea and there are a few spelling errors and grammar mistakes you can point them out if you want and I will try to fix them and any no-where leading paths. Please tell me if I should finish it. And please feel free to right one like mine PLEase feel free to! First one I actually put time into I spent 5 days on the first 3 years as EMPEROR which is the only pickable one by the way

I have been playing several games on several different devices and i have noticed that all the ruling of a country in it is either really short or involves managing cities no sit on your thrown for the game with occassional escapades or invading another country with your army and have them attack. For example fable 3 yes you made like 8 choices wow i really enjoyed my 5 minutes of ruling this game is all about ruling your country no 8 choices and then you have everything end. This is set on a world similiar to midieval earth. Where there are subtle undertones of magic and forces more powerful than you. Be emperor, Monarch, or President. Benovalant leader or Evil dictator you need to win the loyalty of your people in any way possible. Yes as emperor before you make decisions you must secure your empire.

Player Comments

This was bad ummm the story wasn't finished some links didn't work

— ZenUndead on 3/12/2012 10:48:15 AM with a score of 0

This isn't awful by any means, but it could definitely use a lot of work.

— Doodled on 3/4/2012 7:31:00 PM with a score of 0

Great game. If you finish the other storylines, then I'll consider rating this 8 out of 8.

7/8

— XXXXXX on 3/3/2012 10:32:18 PM with a score of 0

I liked the prospect of it, but it didn't turn out the way I thought it would. The pages were super short and didn't leave much for actual decisions. It was less of making a country and more of hearing that things happened, there was almost no detail.

— ThisisBo on 2/29/2012 5:11:19 PM with a score of 0

Each page is extremely short, and you need to do some serious proofreading.
Also everything seemed to result in the traitors ending.

— Evagirl on 2/29/2012 1:55:30 PM with a score of 0

Although the concept of your game is interesting, the game itself needs improvement. Some of the choices were just random, without any hint of why you should choose them or what they will do. Your spelling also needs some improvement and it might be a good idea to add punctuations to your story ;)But don't give up, this has the potential to become a great game.

— Romulus on 2/29/2012 11:12:28 AM with a score of 0

Good:
1. Creativity of situations and consequences of choices
2. Nonlinearity
3. Transitions between years

Bad:
1. Lack of commas and other critical punctuation
2. There was at least one link that didn't lead to another page

Ugly:
1. Apparent author laziness in proofreading- the author should proofread the story, not the readers
2. 5 days? Most good stories took months of planning and writing (JJJ is an exception)

I definitely would be interested in a full improved version, but the reception won't be much better unless the amount of effort put into it increases dramatically.

— urnam0 on 2/29/2012 1:31:21 AM with a score of 0

I liked this story, good job. It was short and simple but pretty enjoyable. I will defiantly read the other story branches provided you put them up.

— AtomicWaste on 2/28/2012 11:09:39 PM with a score of 0

I though it was an interesting concept - I'd read the other paths if you write them.

— BerkaZerka on 2/28/2012 9:33:49 PM with a score of 0

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