A Night in Heck

Player Rating4.02/8

"#319 overall, #23 for 2016"
based on 109 ratings since 04/19/2016
played 1,025 times (finished 138)

Story Difficulty6/8

"wandering through the desert"

Play Length5/8

"Not going to lose any sleep"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

Tags

Horror

In this educational quest, you're a middle school kid looking to fit in. After an argument, you're challenged to spend the night in an abandoned, haunted house, where your bravery and courage will be tested.

Player Comments

The old 'spend the night in a haunted house' plot is such a well worn cliche it takes a lot of skill to make it interesting. The writing in this one was pretty decent overall, but there were a few typos, and more could've been done in the beginning to catch the reader's attention or make them care about these kids in the first place.

There were a couple of genuinely creepy moments, but the haunted house itself (or maybe it's just the paths I took) didn't quite live up to its reputation. Both times the kids encountered something with the potential to be dangerous they simply ran away and the game ended with them safely outside. Also, I gathered the house was actually being lived in and we stole someone's priceless baseball card, but there was no follow up to that other that 'woo, we're rich now!'

There was a nice use of pictures throughout, though some seemed out of place. I would've stuck with one style, such as the real photos.

All the items had logical uses, though I'm not sure what the pebbles were supposed to do...they were usable, but didn't exactly help much in the basement. (Though admittedly it was kind of a subversion of expectations when they at first SEEMED to, and it led to one of the creepier moments...)

Overall I enjoyed this, and I hope you keep writing.
-- mizal on 4/19/2016 9:49:28 AM with a score of 0
I would be freaked out if I was in the mansion. I'm just glad I survived
-- Jaiden James Samples on 3/17/2019 9:14:19 PM with a score of 0
You got a meh on the nomnom scale! I liked how you needed to use the items, but why was the house brand new? I felt like you were just breaking in someone's house during their vacation. What were those rocks for? Is it just me or does Jonas seem strange possibly evil? Anyways good job!
-- Cake_Oi on 2/1/2019 6:17:00 PM with a score of 0
A 4 only bc it was too short.
-- Quorrah on 9/16/2018 11:37:05 PM with a score of 0
fun but wasn’t very difficult
-- parker gemini on 9/4/2018 8:01:37 PM with a score of 0
wait whyd Jonas give me rocks tho? what did he know??????
-- zephurricane on 1/22/2018 3:14:05 AM with a score of 0
This is quite a confusing story.
-- Luna on 4/21/2017 7:03:16 AM with a score of 0
It's a good game if you know how to play your cards right.
-- 248batman16 on 3/3/2017 3:53:11 PM with a score of 0
Effing great. The fact that you have to use items to survive is amazing
-- CephalopodsRus on 2/19/2017 12:02:14 PM with a score of 0
good! i liked the cake ending, but couldn't find the grisly one mentioned in the comments. still enjoyed it though!
-- cupcakegal on 8/4/2016 7:15:34 PM with a score of 0
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