A Picnic Lunch

Player Rating2.99/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 75 ratings since 10/29/2014
played 1,289 times (finished 80)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

Tags

Humor

You are going on a picnic with your family. It is supposed to be a wonderfully happy afternoon for you all. Things take an unexpected twist and everything goes drastically wrong. Will you survive this picnic lunch? 

WARNING: Clowns... well only sometimes

Player Comments

After I read this story, I had the urge to slam my head against a wall.

This storygame is just so illogical and weird, and it was completely random. This is what happens when you try to make a humorous game about murderous clowns, I suppose.

It's completely illogical, for example: how was someone able to pick out every sprinkle in my ice cream sundae and throw a bunch of dehydrated super bugs on it? More importantly, how did nobody notice?

The whole clowns thing was way too cliche and dumb, I mean, I can't tell you how many stories i've seen about murderous dolls and clowns and shit. If you'd actually had some character development and a plot better then eating lunch and surviving clown attacks, it might have been somewhat decent.

Also, I think someone might be able to notice dozens of clowns creeping up behind them, no?

1/8.
-- MinnieKing on 3/21/2017 7:00:00 PM
It's a fairly cliche plot but that didn't really matter. My biggest gripe are the choices, which half the time were completely irrational. If you saw a clown in public, why would you attack/run away from it? Why would you throw up from something as harmless as brain freeze? If there was some build-up to the end instead of "you see x do you do y or z" and one choice leading to death, perhaps this story would be a lot better. That, and it needs to be proofread.
-- FazzTheMan on 6/19/2015 12:41:56 AM
really really bad :( 2/8
-- Linda on 12/5/2017 3:42:31 AM
Well, that was really, really disgusting.
-- Saika on 8/4/2017 5:07:43 AM
OK, it's a bit random, but I still gave it 1 5 for interestion concept and good writing
-- Chickdove on 5/9/2017 12:36:35 AM
Hi :-). Good game, but I feel you could add a bit more to it, to make it more interesting. Like, weapons to help the character escape, or defeat the clowns. Thanks for writing this horror story. Yummy picnic as well by the way. Especially the ice cream sunday. :-).
-- Rahila on 10/28/2016 1:11:14 PM
Ridiculous and completely pointless. By reading the other comments, I figured it would be stupid, but what I didn't realize was HOW stupid.
-- Addison on 7/23/2016 3:02:21 PM
it was good
-- Buber on 6/16/2016 8:24:00 PM
That was absolutely stupid.
-- Kate on 5/21/2016 4:32:26 PM
That was cool we survived yay!
-- Bob and Joe on 1/28/2016 3:52:39 PM
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