A Picnic Lunch

Player Rating3.06/8

"#500 overall, #53 for 2014"
based on 102 ratings since 10/29/2014
played 1,585 times (finished 117)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

Tags

Humor

You are going on a picnic with your family. It is supposed to be a wonderfully happy afternoon for you all. Things take an unexpected twist and everything goes drastically wrong. Will you survive this picnic lunch? 

WARNING: Clowns... well only sometimes

Player Comments

After I read this story, I had the urge to slam my head against a wall.

This storygame is just so illogical and weird, and it was completely random. This is what happens when you try to make a humorous game about murderous clowns, I suppose.

It's completely illogical, for example: how was someone able to pick out every sprinkle in my ice cream sundae and throw a bunch of dehydrated super bugs on it? More importantly, how did nobody notice?

The whole clowns thing was way too cliche and dumb, I mean, I can't tell you how many stories i've seen about murderous dolls and clowns and shit. If you'd actually had some character development and a plot better then eating lunch and surviving clown attacks, it might have been somewhat decent.

Also, I think someone might be able to notice dozens of clowns creeping up behind them, no?

1/8.
-- MinnieKing on 3/21/2017 7:00:00 PM
It's a fairly cliche plot but that didn't really matter. My biggest gripe are the choices, which half the time were completely irrational. If you saw a clown in public, why would you attack/run away from it? Why would you throw up from something as harmless as brain freeze? If there was some build-up to the end instead of "you see x do you do y or z" and one choice leading to death, perhaps this story would be a lot better. That, and it needs to be proofread.
-- FazzTheMan on 6/19/2015 12:41:56 AM
So at first, I thought you would need a personal editor. But after playing your game I realize you need a different kind of personal help. Also, why isn't there an option to join a terrorist group and kill the clowns? What the fuck guys. I really disliked this because ISIS was not apart of it. I think to help this story I would add ISIS (of course) I would also add some sonic OCs just saying.
-- Luwen on 6/7/2018 12:23:32 PM
Well it's exciting. I can't figure out how to make it as long as it says it is, I never make it far
-- Anactaka on 6/5/2018 12:03:49 PM
Gah! There was NO WAY I was going to sacrifice the children. >:-(
-- Anactaka on 6/5/2018 12:01:38 PM
I chose the sundae to keep it from melting! Grr.
-- Anactaka on 6/5/2018 11:58:50 AM
really really bad :( 2/8
-- Linda on 12/5/2017 3:42:31 AM
Well, that was really, really disgusting.
-- Saika on 8/4/2017 5:07:43 AM
OK, it's a bit random, but I still gave it 1 5 for interestion concept and good writing
-- Chickdove on 5/9/2017 12:36:35 AM
Hi :-). Good game, but I feel you could add a bit more to it, to make it more interesting. Like, weapons to help the character escape, or defeat the clowns. Thanks for writing this horror story. Yummy picnic as well by the way. Especially the ice cream sunday. :-).
-- Rahila on 10/28/2016 1:11:14 PM
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