A Picnic Lunch

Player Rating2.98/8

"#526 overall, #58 for 2014"
based on 106 ratings since 10/29/2014
played 1,626 times (finished 124)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

Tags

Humor

You are going on a picnic with your family. It is supposed to be a wonderfully happy afternoon for you all. Things take an unexpected twist and everything goes drastically wrong. Will you survive this picnic lunch? 

WARNING: Clowns... well only sometimes

Player Comments

After I read this story, I had the urge to slam my head against a wall.

This storygame is just so illogical and weird, and it was completely random. This is what happens when you try to make a humorous game about murderous clowns, I suppose.

It's completely illogical, for example: how was someone able to pick out every sprinkle in my ice cream sundae and throw a bunch of dehydrated super bugs on it? More importantly, how did nobody notice?

The whole clowns thing was way too cliche and dumb, I mean, I can't tell you how many stories i've seen about murderous dolls and clowns and shit. If you'd actually had some character development and a plot better then eating lunch and surviving clown attacks, it might have been somewhat decent.

Also, I think someone might be able to notice dozens of clowns creeping up behind them, no?

1/8.
-- MinnieKing on 3/21/2017 7:00:00 PM
It's a fairly cliche plot but that didn't really matter. My biggest gripe are the choices, which half the time were completely irrational. If you saw a clown in public, why would you attack/run away from it? Why would you throw up from something as harmless as brain freeze? If there was some build-up to the end instead of "you see x do you do y or z" and one choice leading to death, perhaps this story would be a lot better. That, and it needs to be proofread.
-- FazzTheMan on 6/19/2015 12:41:56 AM
SPOILER ALERT!!!

Hmmm... Maybe if the story explained more about where and why the clowns and bugs coincide. Or do they coincide?
-- Quorrah on 9/18/2018 5:08:09 PM
So at first, I thought you would need a personal editor. But after playing your game I realize you need a different kind of personal help. Also, why isn't there an option to join a terrorist group and kill the clowns? What the fuck guys. I really disliked this because ISIS was not apart of it. I think to help this story I would add ISIS (of course) I would also add some sonic OCs just saying.
-- Luwen on 6/7/2018 12:23:32 PM
Well it's exciting. I can't figure out how to make it as long as it says it is, I never make it far
-- Anactaka on 6/5/2018 12:03:49 PM
Gah! There was NO WAY I was going to sacrifice the children. >:-(
-- Anactaka on 6/5/2018 12:01:38 PM
I chose the sundae to keep it from melting! Grr.
-- Anactaka on 6/5/2018 11:58:50 AM
really really bad :( 2/8
-- Linda on 12/5/2017 3:42:31 AM
Well, that was really, really disgusting.
-- Saika on 8/4/2017 5:07:43 AM
OK, it's a bit random, but I still gave it 1 5 for interestion concept and good writing
-- Chickdove on 5/9/2017 12:36:35 AM
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