A Story of Love, Death, and Eggs

Player Rating3.54/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 41 ratings since 01/17/2019
played 277 times (finished 53)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

Tags

Humor

Just a small adventure that questions morals and why you make the choices you do.

The main goal is to get to some eggs, in any way possible.

Terribly silly things will plague your short journey, so watch out!

(And yes, this story game is pretty crazy and was made for one of my classes.)

Player Comments

Plot twist... You are the Easter Bunny! ^_^
-- Avery_Moore on 4/13/2019 5:56:52 PM with a score of 0
Cute little adventure. Really wish I could have pet that dog :)
-- Rivertail on 3/26/2019 12:17:52 PM with a score of 0
That...was beautiful. Truly amazing.

Anyways, I didn't notice any grammar mistakes or storyline mistakes. It was funny. Too many fourth wall breaks for me though. Do you know how expensive it is the rebuild the fourth wall? A lot of money.
-- Benajah765 on 3/19/2019 11:06:36 AM with a score of 0
This game is very ridiculous, but was able to provide me sheer entertainment the entire way through. Great job
-- Llewxam on 3/11/2019 5:36:16 PM with a score of 0
I enjoyed the story, although it was kind of short. I didn't notice many spelling mistakes. That was one doozy of a ride though.
-- Unkindcrab on 3/6/2019 4:43:51 PM with a score of 0
Entertaining to say at least. Funny, but lacking in ambition.
-- Dilatory on 3/6/2019 3:25:05 AM with a score of 0
I don't know what I expected, but it wasn't this. Very entertaining, if short. Bravo!
-- mous3r on 2/28/2019 2:01:39 PM with a score of 0
Amazing. The eggs have blessed me. Amen. I only worship eggs now.
-- Dogwhispered on 2/16/2019 7:48:40 PM with a score of 0
Well, like those little self-made games that killed five minutes in a fun and entertaining way: it was random but not so random as to lose the thread of the bizarre storyline (I don't think since Dr Eggman from Sonic the Hedgehog I can remember a more egg-obsessed character).

The grammar was good but there were a few minor typos, you wrote "board" instead of "bored" and referred to a Cake Aisle as a Cake Isle (which does admittedly sound more fun). There were some interestingly creative lines (the phrase "making is squack in pain as it poofs into a raw chicken" struck me as particularly imaginative) and it was a nice example of Literary Nonsense of the sort of Alice in Wonderland variety.

I think if you kept writing and applied yourself to producing a more traditional choose your own adventure your creativity could take it down some rather fun paths, perhaps branching out into several fun storylines such as the egg one. Not too bad and better than a lot of other random-lol stories out there, 3/8
-- Will11 on 2/15/2019 12:10:30 AM with a score of 0
So I chose to give this storygame a chance just based off of the pure, sheer amusement I got from just looking at the title. It is mildly funny, I’ll give you that, especially for this storygame (since its the kind of storygame that sort of is the random-ness, noneness-full genre). It’s written with good grammar though I would have loved to not be able to fall out the window endlessly in a loop instead of being forced to pick the right option. Overall, this would have been cool if written with more detail, but it’s decent for the genre you picked it for.

P.S. I don’t like raw cookie dough.
-- At_Your_Throat on 2/6/2019 11:39:01 PM with a score of 0
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