Achilles II: The Chykri

Very good follow-up to Achilles. The writing in this game reflects the more polished and developed style used by the end of Achilles, with a new and mostly compelling plot overall.
My main complaint lies with the few battle scenes in this story. For a storygame depicting an epic war for the fate of the galaxy, General Achilles may as well have been Speaker of the House Achilles for all the battle decisions he made. Most of it was deciding funding and research grants and negotiations that, while important and enjoyable overall, should not exclude the battle scenes we're trying to support with all this behind-the-scenes work.
To be clear: I love what is here. But I want more battle tactical decisions, instead of just bureaucratic decisions impacting the battles.

Also, one last minor thing. After all that time choosing which ship designs and prototypes to support, it would be nice to see their names mentioned during the battles.

This was fantastic.
Sci-Fi is not a genre I like as a rule but this and it's prequel are exceptions: the writing is strong, the characters creative and the situations interesting throughout and your use of the Variables system is as brilliant as Sindri's use of the Items Feature in his Homo Perfectus series. The choices had effects which is always important in multiple choice stories and I think this could even by called a political thriller.
You both seem to really enjoy writing these and people definitely enjoy reading them so hopefully there will be a sequel that continues to branch into new areas, I think this story is definitely feature-worthy and it was impressively virtually error-free (I spotted 1 accidental duplication of the same link but I wanted to keep reading so I forgot to note which page).
This was fantastic, incredibly re-readable and I really hope you both write more :D

Does anyone know what each luck choice gives?

Nice

A really good addition to the first game I think this is one of the best games on the website to be honest. I really hope to see a third.

truly and utterly incredible. I could not put this adventure down for a second. I had to play it over the course of multiple days and it was worth it!

I really loved both in the series, the only issues were in the grammar but that was expected and not bad enough to hinder the reading. I would really love to see another in the series, its an amazing story with a great author spinning its tale. Thank you good sir ;)

I would agree with most people that the firs one is better bur I liked this one can't wait for the next one.

Was tired when I played it but from what I gathered it was awesome

It was amazing, despite the bad spelling and grammar, it was absolutely something else.