Armed Forces Quest: Terrorist Attack!

This isn't exactly a storygame. There is no story to it, and virtually no defined characters or backstories. Who am I? Who am I fighting? Who are my comrades? Where is the battlefield located? I have so many unanswered questions for this story, and perhaps I may never get an answer to them. This storygame is far too short and extremely linear: you either pick the right option and get to advance, or pick the wrong option and get slapped in the face with an End Game link.

The writing itself wasn't any better, either. It was basic, choppy and mediocre at best. The average page length was horrendously short, mere sentences per page instead of paragraphs. Nothing was fully explained and the only reward I get for "winning" was some kind of badge that I wouldn't put on my profile or signature anywhere. Instead of having the of satisfaction of finishing a good story, I get nothing.

1/8. This is far from complete. I'm surprised it managed to stay published for this long.

So short nice plot but lame length and really, really easy!! Good job but I'd like to see it remade better.

Way too short, and there are a thousand stories similar to this.
Keep trying :)

It was fun??

this guy spells like a preschooler. let me guess, is he a 4 yr old

Why is this like this?

It was way too short. It was a fine game idea however.

Extremely short. I probably would've enjoyed this game more if it was longer. I also would love to see variables come into play. I think it's a great start, but I would love to see more work done on this game and it could be great.

Quite short, but it isn't the most horrible storygame I have played. It wasn't too bad, apart from the grammar and short sentences, it wasn't bad but not too fantastic either.

...I can see why this is two stars...Multiple grammar issues, kind of short, and other...things.