Player Comments on Frameshift
It's well written, though most choices seemed to lead to the same ending, and once it did give me a different ending most of the page was a massive error message.
on 9/23/2017 6:18:09 PM with a score of 0
Nice story, but is it only me or that there was really only one ending?. Overall it interesting to read and great characters.
on 9/23/2017 9:05:44 AM with a score of 0
Holy shit is this story good. It's long, intriguing, and well written. The voice in the head is a nice touch, and the fake ending was very intuitive. 7/8, for sure.
Although, I felt like there wasn't that many choices, and if the time restraints weren't set on the story this would have been tremendously better. Still, a great addition to the site. I'd vote this to win the contest.
on 9/21/2017 12:09:12 PM with a score of 0
This was one of the best of the newer stories I've read in a while. The way the characters develop and the ending was bitter sweet. All in all a good story.
on 9/20/2017 11:01:59 AM with a score of 0
Great story, I especially loved that fake ending. You have a pretty good shot at winning, except that I haven't looked at the other entries yet. :P
on 9/18/2017 6:53:01 PM with a score of 0