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SYSTEM ERROR.

ACCESS DENIED.

WARFTHECAT F-F-F-FAILED.

NEW CHALLENGER IDENTIFIED.

CHALLENGER APPROACHING...

REBOOTING HOPE.

APPROACHING...

APPROACHING...
-- AzBaz on 1/15/2018 3:52:25 PM with a score of 0
There are 66429 posible combinations, I have better things to do with my time.
-- warfthecat on 1/12/2018 8:30:53 AM with a score of 0
SYSTEM ERROR.

ACCESS DENIED.

ACCESS DENIED.

ACCESS DENIED.

RESETTING PASSWORD, PLEASE WAIT...

ACCESS GRANTED.
-- AzBaz on 1/9/2018 10:44:29 AM with a score of 0
Can't find the passcode!
-- JOHNDOE on 1/3/2018 2:54:16 PM with a score of 0
Love this story especially when I spent about 30 mins trying to break the code and none of these works,

98913-setting yourself up for failure

4851
4581
4518
4815
4185
4158

1584
1548
1854
1845
1485
1458

5184
5148
5481
5418
5814
5841


8514
8541
8415
8451
8145
8154
-- Forepaw on 1/1/2018 10:20:28 PM with a score of 0
The contest is over, could you publish the password now or maybe do something smart in the description like make it 4851 due to you using those four numbers in the description. Hope you edit it soon.
-- Rando on 1/1/2018 7:15:42 PM with a score of 0
It's well written, though most choices seemed to lead to the same ending, and once it did give me a different ending most of the page was a massive error message.
-- Killa_Robot on 9/23/2017 6:18:09 PM with a score of 0
Nice story, but is it only me or that there was really only one ending?. Overall it interesting to read and great characters.
-- futurehero97 on 9/23/2017 9:05:44 AM with a score of 0
Holy shit is this story good. It's long, intriguing, and well written. The voice in the head is a nice touch, and the fake ending was very intuitive. 7/8, for sure.

Although, I felt like there wasn't that many choices, and if the time restraints weren't set on the story this would have been tremendously better. Still, a great addition to the site. I'd vote this to win the contest.
-- RoyalGhost_007 on 9/21/2017 12:09:12 PM with a score of 0
This was one of the best of the newer stories I've read in a while. The way the characters develop and the ending was bitter sweet. All in all a good story.

-- corgi213 on 9/20/2017 11:01:59 AM with a score of 0
Great story, I especially loved that fake ending. You have a pretty good shot at winning, except that I haven't looked at the other entries yet. :P
-- TheSpectricRat on 9/18/2017 6:53:01 PM with a score of 0
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