Hostage Rescue 1- Past transgressions

Player Rating3.06/8

"#710 overall, #91 for 2015"
based on 56 ratings since 12/14/2015
played 451 times (finished 48)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level1/8

"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

You leave your star-studded career in the military special forces and take on a new security job within civilian populations. It turns out its more than you bargained for, but then its not your place to go soft when things get hard.

Player Comments

The grammar is pretty good; nothing struck out to me. Also, the maturity level is 1/8. Perhaps this should be higher with the death idea and the fact that there are terrorists (unless I am completely reading this wrong).

Nice plot, actually. There is a purpose for the protagonist. Um. Nice interactions between the characters.

I wish there was more on setting, other characters, organizations, and action. This would enhance the quality of the storygame a lot because you have decent plot right here.
-- Crescentstar on 12/8/2016 10:31:01 PM with a score of 0
It was a small, but good read. Grammar and spelling were just about perfect. Punctuation wasn't too bad.

It was slightly short, had some length and on a few pages there was a lot of writing, which, was nice, but it would've been nicer if it had continuously long pages.

The effort of this story has been seen, and there is a glimmer of a better writer, just waiting to be found :) 4/8

(Also, sitted is not a word)
-- Shadowulf on 5/25/2016 4:56:59 AM with a score of 0
Well...little VIOLENT.
-- frankiehotdog on 7/17/2019 8:38:41 PM with a score of 0
Not bad, I guess. May have found a broken link, but after clicking through it again, I think it was just my computer spazzing out on me.
-- crazygurl on 7/13/2017 8:58:59 PM with a score of 0
That was so good, make more make more
-- corgi213 on 12/13/2015 9:48:30 AM with a score of 0
Probably should check the grammar, but otherwise, a decent story. Seems as a setup for a sequel. I did find an error on a page, which the link was blank.
-- Robby2977 on 12/10/2015 8:48:32 PM with a score of 0
It was a good idea and the writing gave good descriptions of what is going on without taking too much time, only the choices seemed to end up in random endings and the length could've been longer and more involving.
-- YarikCool on 12/7/2015 11:18:44 PM with a score of 0
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