Island Attack: Raid

Player Rating3.34/8

"#711 overall, #55 for 2012"
based on 149 ratings since 07/14/2012
played 1,046 times (finished 123)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

Sci Fi, Serious, Distant Planet Adventure

Player Comments

Kudos for working with variables and publishing a story within your first three days as a member. You seem to understand the basics of what makes a storygame good, which does show. However, the "You Died" pages appear without any explanation of why. This seems to be a result of inexperience with the system. If you revise and proofread your future stories, as well as fiddle a bit more with the system, your story-games might turn out to be pretty good! For now, however, it is only mildly enjoyable, and could use serious work.
-- Doodled on 2/23/2012 8:37:47 PM with a score of 0
Nice quick fun. Loved the bird. You might want to fix "here an alarm go off" on "Go Right" and "the helicopter shoot all the guards" on the final page.
-- Northwind on 6/16/2020 2:54:31 AM with a score of 0
I won!! I won I won I won, and with 14 health left!!!
-- Hi on 2/16/2020 6:01:16 PM with a score of 0
Too short and has no plot...
-- AUAKSA on 5/17/2018 9:51:20 PM with a score of 0
yaboi said ok its pretty good man :)
-- yaboi Jeff on 2/4/2018 5:11:55 PM with a score of 0
Fun but short.
-- crusader on 6/25/2016 2:54:09 PM with a score of 0
Death pays for death.
-- walker. on 5/26/2016 12:47:15 AM with a score of 0
Short but should definitely get a 7 or 8. There should be more like this.
-- Dabosscreeper on 4/1/2016 1:25:54 AM with a score of 0
Certainly not bad, but pretty short. There needs to be more storygames like this.
-- TheMonitor on 7/15/2015 4:28:40 PM with a score of 0
A little bit boring, not very exciting. Also, the pages could've been slightly longer.
-- Creature on 3/24/2015 2:20:13 PM with a score of 0
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