Jump For Joy
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played 1,092 times (finished 129)
"no possible way to lose"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.
this is a game thats really nifty cause all the people in it are popular.This game is especially made to combat Senoir Pat Roaches updated Crazy Pete.
It may seem like a pointless game to play but there is one hint in it, that might make it worth playing. ( this game is in no way my best work, you can't really choose your actions that well, but you can go through it, recognize some peeps, and use the comments section.
Yes this game is groundbreaking cause it was the first to use the comment section which is why it was pretty much made) IN ONE DAY HA HAH HAH HAH beat that JOHNY V
This was honestly pretty random to say the least. I did get a good portion of the pop culture references in this game, so there's that. The story in this was rather silly and nonsensical, but I can't say that the writing in this was too bad, although there were some issues with certain typos and grammar that I came across while reading this. Some proofreading would have went a long way with possibly fixing many of the errors that I came across.
Despite some of this game's flaws, this isn't something that I would call dull or uninteresting, because there's certainly some element of adventure with the choices that are presented to the reader in this storygame. So while this isn't the best in the technical sense, it's not bad in at least being something of a interesting read at the end of the day.
So not bad, but this also has some errors that are rather hard to overlook to truly enjoy what's here in this game. I just think that this could have been a bit more fulfilling if it wasn't a storygame that relied on being so random at times.
Overall, there is some promise shown in the writing of this game, but there's also quite a bit of bad here in this game as well.
on 6/4/2017 11:59:01 PM with a score of 0
Just confusing. I had no idea what was going on half the time and the grammar and sentence structure was not that great. Also, I just did not get the plot of the game and even with the nice amount of options this game provided, it still felt lacking.
on 5/2/2012 11:01:20 AM with a score of 0
This story made absolutely NO sense.
on 8/31/2019 8:44:45 AM with a score of 0
"Here we go again Wilma" Fred Shoughts." Ugh.
This story is horrendously bad and should never have been conceived. The only reasons I can think to why it hasn't been righteously erased from the face of this site is because of lacking 2001 standards and the fact the author is literally one of the creators of this site.
on 12/9/2018 9:12:53 AM with a score of 0
Very random, but despite that (or more likely because of it), it's not very funny.
on 9/16/2018 12:34:51 PM with a score of 0
I have... literally no idea what I just read...
on 6/10/2018 11:00:37 AM with a score of 0
I'd give it a 5-6 if it had good spelling because of that I give it a 3
on 10/17/2017 5:29:48 PM with a score of 0
I only actually read about 2 pages all the way through because your grammar was frankly atrocious. This concept could have worked? But... even your description is almost unreadable, before one even clicks "start game." Please consider redoing this with a special focus on formatting, spelling, and grammar...
on 6/1/2017 1:34:01 PM with a score of 0
What the heck? This was confusing, and there were MANY typos. This is lacked the amount of detail, and I couldn't really figure out the plot. This game is awful. Sorry for the negative reviews, but it is true. 1/8
on 5/31/2017 11:18:23 AM with a score of 1000
I actually like the concept of just hanging out in a metropolis and meeting people. Depending on who you hang with/what you do it can be a normal night out or turn into something completely amazing. I can see this being done really well if you put more effort into it.
3/8, poor grammar and lolrandoms turned me off.
on 5/17/2017 5:37:03 AM with a score of 0
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