Kill that Spider!

I just read my last comment on this storygame, and thought, "did I overrate this?"

I just read it again, and no. I did not overrate it. This was a great storygame, and you did a great job of fleshing out the plot. The detail was definitely sufficient and I can tell you put effort into this.

I honestly loved the plot. Even if it's something small, like killing a spider, you did a great job with making it a complete storygame.

I did laugh a few times, and I had fun reading the humorous writing. Sadly, the writing was a bit linear, but not much. It was still enjoyable.

A bit dramatic, but definitely realistic. I can see people going to these lengths just to kill a spider, honestly xD

I also had a lot of fun finding all the endings. I felt a bit bad for the spider in the microwave ending though :P

6/8.

I'm sure other people have commented this before, but this is the level of drama I feel every time I have to kill a spider.
I think it would've been a little better if it didn't seem so totally based on luck, and keep veering from the ridiculous to the realistic, but maybe that's just me. Was it necessary for the reader to die? Being alive knowing that there's an escaped spider in your home is a dark enough ending...at least for me.
Loved the humor, particularly with the appliance at the end. I was embarrassed by how much I enjoyed "watching" that.

worth every cent!

You know when I woke up this morning I didn't expect to be reading a story about fighting a spider.

8/8 Released the spider first try.

Fantastically well written. It's a bit linear, but the story has enough charm that it doesn't matter. A great deal of care was clearly given into writing these death scenes and I enjoyed dying almost as much as I enjoyed beating the game. I loved that you had items used in unexpected but clearly obvious ways and that exploration made a huge difference. This wasn't a click the right options fest, you had more exploration inside a single bathroom than most authors put into their entire story.

I'll admit I died a couple times, but that only served to motivate me more. That spider did not take long to become my archnemsis and I genuinely felt like this was war. I was using whatever means I had at my disposal, but I was not about to let the witch that killed my father get away. By the time I finally trapped her, I was seething with so much hate there was no forgiveness. I paid a high price to kill that spider, but damn was it worth it. I looked at the disclaimer and I have to say, that's not true. One spider was harmed in this story. A lot.

God I hate spiders. The satisfaction of cooking one in the microwave makes me very happy.
Great story.

Not bad, but I expect more ending, and more item. But the humor and writing is great!

Fun, but short. The description led me to think there was more, but... meh. I assume the one where you just fry them in the microwave/release them into the wild is the good ending, yeah?

this was pretty funny. Funny thing is this actually happened to me except it was with a daddy long legs. But this is way funnier.

It was short and sweet. I enjoyed the humor and the idea of the story. It was quirky, and in some parts I felt a bit shocked from the part with the spider death, but that is ok.