My Apocalypse: On The Road Again (First Entry)

Not bad for a first shot at story games. You used items well and you had a decent plot. Thankfully, I could use the items in more than one place as well, which is good. On the other hand, the narrating was a little weird(I was confused on who was talking half the time.), and you really didn't describe things as well as you could have.

I would suggest adding pictures, more descriptions(Of people, places, things, etc.), and just a little bit more clearer narrating.

4/8

i love it

Great stories,But what happened next

Short and sweet with a few minor spelling errors. Overall, great adventure!

I still find it terribly unrealistic that any college student has a first aid kit. A gun, I may believe, a knife perhaps too.
Oh well, I died during the gunfight.

Too brief. More choices, please.

Okay. This game put me in a loop the first time I played it. Use your First Aid Kit or Knife, you get a message about your conscience which forces you to go back. Use your gun? You...technically win, I think, but there's NO end link and you're eventually taken back to the conscience page which then loops back to the page with the gun. I was so confused and ended up restarting to take another route.

Pretty good! If it was it bit longer it would be 10 times better

Cool story

Funny