, #52 for
played 2,964 times (finished 299)
"march in the swamp"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.
You are at a new school, and you're not having a good day. You have to battle guys over a girl.
I don't get the rating why is it 6/8 almost nothing inappropriate happens.
-- TheLegend27 on 3/17/2019 6:25:07 PM
No real choices, and very linear. Hell, I can't even be allowed to say what I want to, because I was told:
"You really talk about girls like that. You are so horrible. I'm gonna turn you into a nice guy."
I'm like, seriously?
Also, you need to fix the grammar mistakes and make sure you start a new paragraph every time there's a new speaker. 2/8.
on 6/15/2017 7:10:47 PM
And the moral of this story is: the uppercut ALWAYS connects.
on 5/8/2017 9:43:39 AM
I can't believe I won't a fight the other ending was dieing in garbage
-- Sadness on 3/14/2017 8:18:25 PM
It could use some more work. I give it 5/10
on 8/15/2016 9:00:00 AM
Good storygame to play, but it was weird. Like at the beginning, I chose a T-shirt and jeans but I couldn't wear them. I had to wear the other outfit.
If you want to make me happy with this story game, could you please add something more to it? You give both links, but the player can only choose one of them. A good story game should have multiple links on one page.
Over all, I would give this a 3/10. It could be better.
on 8/15/2016 8:56:42 AM
WALLET STEALING TIIIME!!!!
on 4/24/2016 8:17:37 AM
The main problem with this story is how linear it is. No one likes to choose to not take the wallet only to be told 'ha, ha, you're taking it anyway!' No matter what you choose, you are pushed along the single path the author wants you to take. This takes the 'choose your' out of the story.
on 1/10/2016 5:03:52 PM
This was really linear and really short. The whole point of these story games is to give the player an actual choice. You gave the illusion of choice, but then still directed the player to one linear path.
on 12/30/2015 4:30:15 PM
Not bad, very linear but your explanations for why are amusing, it's semi-well written and the story as a whole is not bad.
on 7/28/2015 3:24:20 PM
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