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"march in the swamp"
"Make sure not to blink"
"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.
You are at a new school, and you're not having a good day. You have to battle guys over a girl.
There isn’t a single good ending and I have no idea what happened help
on 10/2/2019 12:35:36 AM with a score of 0
Really... you should have put more work into it.
Firstly, lemme talk about the grammar. There were punctuation mistakes and at some parts I don't even understand what're you saying.
Next, the description is totally lacking stuff. Who exactly is he? What's his goal? Where is he? What is his relationship with others? Is he popular? And love at first sight is almost impossible.
The options, about 2 on every page, which makes it a simple story. It's too short and simple, you meet a girl, you fight her boyfriend, the story ends.
This looks like a storygame which you put it together in 5 minutes. When you start writing a storygame, make sure you actually wanna write one. Rated 1/8 :(
on 6/29/2019 11:23:38 AM with a score of 0
very short and kind of weird. Not many choices to branch out from.
on 5/15/2019 2:26:44 PM with a score of 0
I don't get the rating why is it 6/8 almost nothing inappropriate happens.
-- TheLegend27 on 3/17/2019 6:25:07 PM with a score of 0
No real choices, and very linear. Hell, I can't even be allowed to say what I want to, because I was told:
"You really talk about girls like that. You are so horrible. I'm gonna turn you into a nice guy."
I'm like, seriously?
Also, you need to fix the grammar mistakes and make sure you start a new paragraph every time there's a new speaker. 2/8.
on 6/15/2017 7:10:47 PM with a score of 0
And the moral of this story is: the uppercut ALWAYS connects.
on 5/8/2017 9:43:39 AM with a score of 0
I can't believe I won't a fight the other ending was dieing in garbage
-- Sadness on 3/14/2017 8:18:25 PM with a score of 0
It could use some more work. I give it 5/10
on 8/15/2016 9:00:00 AM with a score of 0
Good storygame to play, but it was weird. Like at the beginning, I chose a T-shirt and jeans but I couldn't wear them. I had to wear the other outfit.
If you want to make me happy with this story game, could you please add something more to it? You give both links, but the player can only choose one of them. A good story game should have multiple links on one page.
Over all, I would give this a 3/10. It could be better.
on 8/15/2016 8:56:42 AM with a score of 0
WALLET STEALING TIIIME!!!!
on 4/24/2016 8:17:37 AM with a score of 0
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