Player Rating3.61/8

"#544 overall, #49 for 2014"
based on 69 ratings since 10/16/2014
played 529 times (finished 79)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.


This is a storygame for my friend Quinn.

By the way, you'll have 10 food bars. For now, I'm not displaying them, but every page, you lose a food bar. If you go too low, you'll be rushed to the hospital and lose, so make sure to eat what's in your inventory!

Also, if you haven't used storygames before (Quinn), make sure to click the food on the page where you get it. Otherwise it won't go into your inventory.

SUMMARY: You're just a normal boy, hanging around school, when something odd happens. Or... If you choose a different path, life continues as normal. Which way shall you go? Will you go up to the hooded figure? Or will you stay safe? No matter what, you will realize that your life has been anything but normal. You just haven't noticed anything.


Player Comments

I found that the story itself was rather interesting for what it was trying to achieve. You were trying to spend a day in the life of Quinn and for the most part it was interesting, but then it suddenly ended after P.E class which was rather dissapointing as I was enjoying this.

Anyway, the grammar was ok and didn't have any major errors, though I must admit, some pages were rather short and lacked any sort of description.

The game in itself is quite interesting and has fairly good grammar, but it is way too short for it to be truly enjoyable. However, even short as it is, I did enjoy it a certain degree, so I'll give it a 4/8.
-- Claw2k11 on 11/24/2016 4:12:06 AM with a score of 0
I was very confused with this story. They have lunch twice in one day. He says that he did the math homework during lunch that day and then after math he has lunch. I am also confused on why the main character wants to please Michael. Does the main character have a crush on Michael? I don't know because there is nothing saying that, and the main character gives ten dollars to a girl because he loves her. That's just not a good enough reason to me.
Does she need the ten dollars?
Where's the back story?
What are the characters personalities?
I know nothing about them or why they are doing the things they do.
-- Francesca1986 on 10/4/2018 12:13:44 PM with a score of 0
-- Kate on 7/23/2016 3:50:51 PM with a score of 0
Eh, I would say it was relatively short. You might need a theme more people would enjoy, as this doesn't really appease me.

But it has potential and keep up the good work, thanks :)
-- MasonJarGuzzi on 3/12/2016 1:14:23 PM with a score of 0

This was a pretty fun story game and had clever humor. A tad too short, but that's okay. Keep up the good work!
-- GMB13carat on 7/12/2015 4:00:55 PM with a score of 0
Somewhat sort, but enjoyable!
-- Boringfirelion on 10/17/2014 9:17:39 AM with a score of 0
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