Love & Dating
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"no possible way to lose"
"A nice jog down the driveway"
"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.
Everyway you choose is correct, just make sure to try and read every path.
This is sweet, touching, and heart-warming...but it's not a storygame. It's just a short story awkwardly placed in first person. I can't truly care for this that is just thrown in my face even despite the fact the whole story is about her. Your grammar needs some work as well; proper punctuation, capitalization, and spelling can make a story that much better.
Just like your first story, you are lacking any choices. In fact, this one doesn't have any choices. Also, it's too short. I give you a C+ for effort. 2/8
on 4/2/2014 11:35:06 PM with a score of 0
I did lose my interest after some minutes after just clicking because the game didn't really captivate me that much.
on 10/19/2017 5:09:01 PM with a score of 0
its short but great! But it doesn't really have a plot to it
on 6/10/2015 7:57:54 PM with a score of 0
That font was something though. I actually wanted to read more but, it was short.
on 6/3/2015 9:19:41 AM with a score of 0
very short and nice but, I wish there was more to it.
on 4/19/2015 2:05:57 PM with a score of 0
Seems to me like you tried too hard to make something 'moving'. It was short, not well written, and rather generic, except for the fact that she was alive at the end. Seems like most people like to kill off lovers in these.
Anyways, don't try to write something that'll pump people up on emotional adrenaline. In my mind, that's always a side-effect of good writing and a good, well developed, clear plot. Just write normally, have fun with it.
on 3/12/2015 3:58:06 PM with a score of 0
Well it was well crafted but too short and you used I in the lower case when it should always be upper case but good use of the pictures :)
on 3/10/2015 11:17:57 PM with a score of 0
P-O-O-P what does that spell? Poop. Just like this game.
-- Brandon on 1/5/2015 8:37:44 PM with a score of 0
It was kind of dull. Basically you just listed out her good qualities, and then happy ever after. The grammar wasn't terrible, but there were still some mistakes. I noticed that, throughout the story, you used 'i' instead of 'I'. A simple proofread would have corrected that.
on 12/30/2014 3:35:50 PM with a score of 0
It was sweet and well written, it almost reminded me of Snow. The pictures were....enticing....nothing wrong with that I guess xD The only flaw is the choices, there are none and although it is very well written, I have no hold in what happens.
on 8/6/2014 11:23:48 AM with a score of 0
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