Seasons Change

Player Rating5.15/8

"#176 overall, #9 for 2014"
based on 168 ratings since 03/13/2014
played 4,491 times (finished 238)

Story Difficulty5/8

"run through the jungle"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

A simple story of two girls and the changing seasons.

Player Comments

Well my Dad sure will be surprised when I tell him his only son has become a lesbian :) On a serious note this is a beautifully written story in the style of Snow and Farewell my Childhood Self. A good mix of choices and development there but I would have liked to see the relationship and experiences explored in more detail, getting into a relationship as a teenager is a scary enough experience but getting into a gay relationship as a teenager in a judgemental society, I imagine that's pretty emotionally challenging. 7/8
-- Will11 on 3/8/2015 10:48:11 PM
Hey, I got the good ending!
-- magicchess29 on 11/3/2018 12:33:43 AM
Looks like the best ending is the most tragic one, where both died. Dead, but happy
-- N on 3/23/2018 3:36:34 AM
wh why that was good i cried
-- tay on 10/16/2017 2:32:18 PM
(No no no my favorite season IS spring I can't believe I was forced to choose summer! Fall and winter, I can't even contemplate :(. )

Anyway, this story has quite a lot of potential. You did a good job of evoking emotion, although it would have been nice to see more background stories for the main characters. For the memories part, for instance, you could have described a specific situation that helps develop the character of Hana even more. Remember, details make things a lot more interesting.

My one main problem with the story is its linearity. Given that this is in the romance category, this was somewhat forgivable, especially since it was decently written. However, **spoiler, sorry** it would be nice to have a perspective where you can choose not to fall in love with Hana, or even a way to prevent Hana from dying (I don't think I found an ending where she doesn't jump?)

Overall, good job. It is a bit reminiscent of the classic Snow, but with a different twist, and certainly one of the better ones that I've seen. 5/8.
-- crazygurl on 6/19/2017 1:48:57 AM
I thought it was cool, but I'm confused. I thought the character I was playing was a girl????
-- AdrianneDeforest on 6/7/2017 3:56:50 PM
amazing
-- c on 12/23/2016 6:09:10 AM
I don't know why people are giving this such low scores. This is almost as good as Sethaniel's Snow, although it's shorter and more linear.
-- jason1stlegion on 6/8/2016 7:39:16 PM
Rated 8/8. This is deep, man. I like it.
-- ponistiti on 4/7/2016 5:05:49 PM
wheres he endiung where she dosent die thanks


-- cerealsss on 3/22/2016 2:18:54 PM
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